Recent Comments

11/14/22, 12:43 PM
I liked this story. There is a lot of potential in it, I hope there will be other chapters. You say that english is not your first language. Are you French ? I'm asking because you use "deceived" instead of "disappointed" (to translate "déçu"), which is a very common mistake made by us French people. ;)

11/14/22, 2:18 PM
@[Nephilim](/user/show/941196) A fellow french user ! X) thx , I'll try to remember it lol (and deceived in fact mean "trompé"...) Don't hesitate to correct me for any kind of errors, better safe than sorry ^^
11/14/22, 2:16 PM
I hope we can see part 2 soon
11/14/22, 2:04 PM
Oh good, now I am aroused by a clown. I didn’t imagine that would happen to me today.
11/13/22, 11:38 PM
Couldn't rate it too highly yet; not much has gone on. But I'm expecting to enjoy future chapters very much. Thanks for writing it!

11/14/22, 11:59 AM
@[meatheadosis](/user/show/9860) Thx for the review ^^
Evan
11/14/22, 1:58 AM
A great opening premise! Unique too. Looking forward to seeing where it goes. Thank you for writing.

11/14/22, 11:59 AM
@[Evan](/user/show/133763) Thank you ^^
11/14/22, 3:01 AM
I enjoy the premise hoping there is more. I think chastity could be a hot direction for this

11/14/22, 11:58 AM
@[Kodafox](/user/show/930890) You're reading in my mind sir :b I'll try to drag things a bit so maybe not in the second chapter, but probably in the third one
11/12/22, 5:40 AM
Love to see this story continuing! Sexy transformation and hot punishment, with the added braking to boot! Also, the boy's lusty venom fangs, loved it!

11/14/22, 11:40 AM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) yeah this one flowed nicely but I actually struggled with deciding on the transformations! I'm glad you liked the results!
Evan
11/14/22, 10:05 AM
Love the premise. Look forward to seeing the results.
11/10/22, 2:40 PM
Will there be more.

11/14/22, 8:35 AM
@[Jonanator ](/user/show/863971) There will be! Got plenty more ideas for poor little Jake…
11/14/22, 8:02 AM
I liked this story and it was really hot, but I really wasn’t a fan of this ending. It just doesn’t feel right with me that Dr. X isn’t the one enjoying the McBride brothers and that he falls under the power of a character that was only properly introduced last chapter. It also feels weird that the “out of my lane” voice was trying to get Dr. X to enslave Brendan to himself only to make him enslaved to another guy in the end? Also Dr. X has been training for years in hypnosis and is meant to have a gift with it in putting men under, and yet he falls under Cody’s control that quickly? Again I know this sounds largely negative but I did really really enjoy the story up until when Cody was introduced.