Recent Comments

11/28/25, 6:16 AM
Ooooh, love it. The element of magic and mystery at the end is really exciting--love the brief peek we get of Fred being brainwashed into a kitchen king--and you have a real knack for capturing characterization. Can't wait to see the rest of the feast. :D
11/28/25, 5:06 AM
Great start!
11/28/25, 12:34 AM
The longer this story goes on, the more my heart breaks for Jamie. He's been betrayed by, abandoned by or had taken away from him everyone he's ever cared for or allowed close to him. It's no wonder Jamie's walls are so impenetrable, he's been hurt so many times he won't allow himself to be vulnerable ever again. I can't help but think that maybe if Master told Jamie the full truth of his plan, his conversion would have gone much more easily.

11/28/25, 2:58 AM
@[phillipsm](/user/show/919402) Possibly, if the plan is good enough. But Jamie would probably still have trouble trusting Master, and he would still have had a very hard time giving himself into Master's control. He knows very well that once he does that, he won't really have any more choices.
11/27/25, 6:32 PM
Incredible story.

11/28/25, 2:56 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks again!
11/22/25, 10:44 AM
Need more of this!

11/28/25, 2:53 AM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) I got more for you :)
11/21/25, 2:48 PM
Amazing and well written. Thanks for the work!

11/28/25, 2:53 AM
@[BrGuy](/user/show/10033894) Thank you too for reading it. Glad you enjoyed and I hope I can keep you coming back for more.
11/20/25, 8:21 PM
An amazing start! Very creative, very well written! Love it!

11/28/25, 2:52 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Thanks very much. It’s about time I gave something back to your website after all the good times it’s given me.
11/28/25, 2:15 AM
Yeah, I'm really looking forward to it! Charlie's a hot cop daddy! 🥵 I hope he plays a role in the plot.
11/27/25, 7:00 PM
You're a fantastic writer. Cannot wait for this to continue.

11/28/25, 1:53 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Aww man, you’re too kind. I hope the next chapter can deliver.
11/28/25, 12:28 AM
Can't wait for more

11/28/25, 1:50 AM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) More is coming :wink: