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10/31/22, 5:56 PM
Awesome story!
10/31/22, 5:50 PM
This story is great. Hot AF. I like all the names from the Ikea catalog. No assembly required but you do use your hands.
10/31/22, 5:40 PM
A solid ending to a great trilogy on this side. Was great to get to know a different side of your writing, really fit the theme with how ominous and mysterious it was at the same time. Amazing job!

10/31/22, 5:45 PM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) Thank you Twan! I was glad to change it up in tone from my other series and share it with everyone. I hope that even beyond all the declarations of love mixed up with lust, it looks twisted and off for it to be nice yet eerily wrong. They’re happy, though. So happy ending?
felix
10/31/22, 5:34 PM
I've never really been into "limbless" stuff, but I like how this story completely objectifies Jason and gives Tommy all the power to use/play with him and manipulate Jason's libido beyond natural means. I'll admit, I do enjoy wicked/undeserved power imbalances like this and I'm curious to see where you'd take a part two

10/31/22, 5:42 PM
@[felix](/user/show/2338654) I'm a submissive top in real life, which is not a common theme I see in stories on here. So I guess I wanted to be the change I wish to see in the world haha. Part 2 is waiting on approval and Part 3 is in the works. Will definitely keep in mind the objectification of Jason as the focus. Thank you for your productive comment!
nycboot
10/31/22, 5:18 PM
Oh, wonderful!!! You should continue more, how he sheds his humanity to fully absorb being an evil demon. Wow!!!
10/31/22, 4:48 PM
That was so good!!!! Though, maybe you should cross-post to Gay Cupid, given the importance of the romance.
tony gary
10/31/22, 3:22 PM
hey man awesome story i mean this story gave me a raging boner guys anyone out there want to use their sheer socked heel to get me off by phone or by email would really love this by email at-(tony.garygiselle@gmail.com) or by phone -at 1-419-474-6356 anytime monday --suinday 4am until 12-midnight thanks guys -TONY IN WEST TOLEDO OHIO..
10/31/22, 11:22 AM
I'm so curious what would've happened with the demon. Very hot story!

10/31/22, 2:54 PM
@[Braindrainme](/user/show/10018131) Trying to figure out what the hell demons do was a major catalyst of many of the magic system developments that made the worldbuilding in this story possible! … uh, but I’d still be writing out of my ass if I said exactly what that demon would have done right now. Rest assured there would have been knotting, and maybe even some transformation. Glad you found the story hot!
10/31/22, 2:15 PM
Awesome to have you back! And what a hot story! A buff guy getting the rubber lifestyle he wanted. Just not in the way he thought. The world just isn't that convenient is it?

felix
10/31/22, 2:53 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) I'm always lingering! And no, never quite so convenient... :)
Sebastián Apollo
10/31/22, 4:59 AM
I'm always amazed when people make these worlds and universes and can write stories that seamlessly fit into them - I'm incredibly envious. As A Possession a Day noted, the worldbuilding you flowed throughout the story along with the mystical elements really serves the work well. Great job, and a very worthy contender!

10/31/22, 2:52 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) It gets easier as the world grows and fills out! The world of Consummation is two years in the making, and still evolving. I actually did a fair amount of history and magic system work to construct the game of questions in this story, at least its original iteration (the draft I finished Friday). I’m glad you enjoyed what I built here! Feels good to know that I’m accomplishing the themes and feelings I intended. And I’m looking forward to reading your most recent story, too…