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10/4/25, 3:22 PM
I really very much like this idea - and the way it s written. Thank you.
10/4/25, 3:16 PM
Perfection.
10/4/25, 2:49 PM
Thank you for pouring your heart into this story as long as you did. I’m so grateful to have read it. This is one of my favourite stories on this site. Aiden might be the perfect foil for the demon. I’m so curious what happened during Aiden’s outburst—which, by the way, is incredibly cathartic; it’s the kind of shit we all wished to say to our tormentors when we were young. I resonate with Aiden’s overflowing love and empathy and forgiveness. I also resonate with the fucking massive amount of cum. And I _love_ that Aiden’s basically surrounded by bully doms. Now they’re pleasure bullies, but they’re fucking bullies still and it’s so hot. I need to write some of that shit. Probably in the military story I’m working on. If you want to hit me up and talk more about your ideas for this story, your writing practice, your kinks, whatever, I’d love to chill. Email me or hit me up on Discord.
10/4/25, 2:33 PM
I’m obsessed. This just gets more interesting—the way Aiden starts being able to slip his own will into commands, the curious cooperation, and of course all of this is so horny and hot. Love the truly obscene amount of cum—you know me.
10/4/25, 2:20 PM
Gods this is so _interesting_ and hot, there’s this cleverness and self-awareness in the POV, a low gnawing tension while I wonder how/when the ball will drop, and the really delicious fact that it’s ask so hot. You really feel for Aiden.
10/4/25, 2:13 PM
One simple mistake: jock for jockstrap. And now the dominance is unleashed. Fuck I want more mistakes to manipulate these characters, especially Gabe.
10/4/25, 2:07 PM
Oh, this is so heart-wrenchingly beautiful. There’s a perverse thrill in the pain and bullying, mixed with this gnawing pity and despair. Thank you for this.
Anonymous
10/4/25, 1:16 PM
Thank you for this story, I like it very much if it s so close as possible to reality. And you human approach is absolutely my cup of tea.
9/30/25, 9:22 PM
So hot. So well structured! Great continuation to an already great story.

10/4/25, 1:14 PM
@[DadisTopped](/user/show/10031852) Thanks for the praise mate! Glad you enjoyed the second chapter
amazing slave
10/3/25, 12:13 PM
this is the hottest story, i hope there will be more hypnosis, leather and submission

Anonymous
10/4/25, 11:37 AM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) yes Master