Recent Comments

10/22/22, 6:44 AM
wow loved this chapter the mayor "says are you happy" waiting for the sentence where he says to Harris "ARE YOU HAPPY" being gay and the next sentence should be " ARE YOU HAPPY TO OBEY ME"
9/9/21, 8:47 PM
Seriously hot. What a pity there is no chance of continuations.

9/11/21, 7:00 PM
@Doug Kent I understand, and I've had several requests for more chapters over the years, but I never intended this story to be anything more than just a one-off. I've got other ideas for stories, which I'll eventually set to print, and hopefully they'll be just as good, or better. ; )

ROBGAGGED
1/3/22, 5:14 PM
@snoopy Magic story, a real dream.. May we find all rubber slavers like him haha

10/22/22, 5:47 AM
Awesome
10/22/22, 4:48 AM
The rules in this story are incredibly interesting and it seems like you have a lot of creative ideas for exploring them, considering the obvious first choice for most writers would be for him to pass an ordinance that he can pass any ordinance he wants

Lucas
10/22/22, 5:37 AM
@[Tkhon](/user/show/40052) Thanks! I’ve been taking a lot of care to not just handout infinite power immedietly, even if some people would really enjoy that :p
10/22/22, 3:49 AM
Such an interesting, complicated mess of a story. I am waiting with bated breath for more! 😛😛😛
10/22/22, 1:11 AM
I just read this now, and I loved it! I would love to see more too lol. It was very creative and slutty.

10/22/22, 3:32 AM
@[Some Guy](/user/show/10017465) Aww, thanks! That's exactly what I was going for! Glad you liked it!
10/22/22, 12:42 AM
Loved this! I've wondered if I'd see a story where the controller has the ability to speak in the same internal monologue voice as the controlled. So I really enjoyed the inclusion of that element as part of the MC. Can't wait to see another hero join ICON!

10/22/22, 3:27 AM
@[Centipix](/user/show/726207) Glad I could tick that box for you! And, don't worry! ICON's already getting creative with my next draft!
10/22/22, 12:23 AM
Wow!!
10/21/22, 6:55 AM
That was a very lovely read and went into unexpected ways. Would love to read a new chapter!

10/22/22, 12:03 AM
@[Anon529373](/user/show/541335) Cheers! Glad you enjoyed the read! I think I have an idea for a new chapter now, so I'll get on it!
10/21/22, 11:24 PM
I wonder if he will cause any physical changes to people.
10/12/22, 5:24 PM
I think about this story everyday, I can’t wait for the sequel!! Please post soon!!

10/12/22, 9:16 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Hi! Thank you so much! It seems as though there won't be more published about these characters after all as sadly the other author and I have had a falling out! If you like, you can message me and I can share the unedited drafts of where we did get to for this.

10/15/22, 1:59 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Oh my God this is such a bummer, I can’t believe it ;( was so excited for the sequel! Would you maybe consider continue the story on your own? This is super special to me and I’d really love to see more of it. But I understand if you don’t want to write it anymore. And yes, I’d love to see the drafts you had for chapter 2, thank you so much! You can send them to me at aumar_e@gmail.com. Thanks! And please, consider continuing this on your own! All the love

10/21/22, 10:33 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thanks for the comment! I'm sorry to have to give you that news. I tried to email the address you gave me with the draft but it bounced. Let me know if there's another address that I should send it to.

10/21/22, 10:45 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) I’m so sorry - it’s aumar_e@hotmail.com Thank you so much! Well, I’d be looking out for stories from you nonetheless :)