Recent Comments

Andrew
9/21/22, 12:47 AM
And hey a question that inspired you to make this story

9/22/22, 12:42 AM
@Andrew are you asking what inspired me to write or what inspired the plot?

Andrew
9/23/22, 10:18 PM
@Cargo Cub i mean it inspired the plot

9/23/22, 11:30 PM
@Andrew just personal experience I guess. Until recently, I had not had the ability to change a ton about my life. I was stuck in a bad living situation and a bad job, and as such my day dreams were always about being able to take control and change things. Once you discover any kind of mind control porn it doesn't take long for your day dreams to take that form. Ive been making stories like this in my head for years, this is just the first time I've written it down and published it.

Andrew
9/24/22, 1:52 AM
@Cargo Cub oh i get it i guess there's no one in particular you want to control like John controls Joe?

9/24/22, 2:19 AM
@Andrew not anyone specific. There are aspects of different folks but I've been fortunate enough to not have to deal with many homophobic assholes.

Andrew
9/24/22, 4:03 AM
@Cargo Cub oh I understand and then you would like for example to be controlled by another person?
Chase
9/23/22, 3:53 AM
Beautifully written, short and to the point while still being hot. Can’t wait for the next part!!

Gingcub
9/24/22, 2:17 AM
@Chase thanks! I’ll try to write a part two soon
9/23/22, 11:56 PM
Oh man please continue this series, or reboot it as something similar. I come back to re-read it all the time, its so hot.
9/23/22, 8:50 PM
I'm enjoying this story. The body distortion from getting fucked is not something I see much, combined with the shrinking was very hot! I love when they team up on Dan and he ends up cumming while shrunk and skewered on cock. I also liked when they teamed up on Kevin in the last chapter. The extreme body shrinking stuff (e.g. getting small enough to fit in underwear, or to fuck a urethra, or go inside an asshole) is not really something I'm very into but it didn't set me off track. If you're open to constructive criticism, I think the story could benefit from clearer pacing and a more central progression and focus. I like when stories have a clear progression, to a strong climax (or maybe a couple) and resolution (that, for a story like this, probably ends with one or all of the guys becoming permanent, happy sluts). This story seemed to wander a bit. The closest thing to a climax for me was Dan shrinking and cumming while skewered like a pig on a roast. But that didn't seem like a central climax to the story but rather a hot graphic that I particularly liked. Then, there is not really a resolution since we don't find out what change was permanent - we get that Dan is stuck in underwear for at least 4 hours, and Kevin is humiliated since his photos were shared on social media, but otherwise it doesn't seem like these guys lives are changed beyond this night. I would have enjoyed more humiliation - e.g. since everyone thinks Kevin has a small dick and was bukkaked, as per the rules of the game, his small dick can't be reversed and he has to be an obvious slut, in order to keep the game a secret. Overall great story, got me very riled up. Scratched some itches, and found a couple new ones!
9/23/22, 8:18 PM
Another great story! Love these superboy stories so much!!
Anonymous
9/23/22, 6:48 PM
Thank you for returning!! Would love for Van to do some sick shit with an entire family, or perhaps faculty
9/23/22, 6:14 PM
Great story! If you're looking for other words to describe "gay voice" a good one is "sibilance," which refers to heavily leaning on 's' sounds.
StatueLover
9/23/22, 5:27 PM
Really liked the induction and hypno parts. Would love to see the trick in a museum. 😝
9/22/22, 5:18 AM
Loved it!

9/23/22, 5:16 PM
@GiveInToTheMusk Thank you. I am so glad you liked it ^_^
Anonymous
9/23/22, 1:16 PM
Omg, what an arousing story 💦

9/23/22, 4:15 PM
@ Thank you!