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8/27/25, 11:33 PM
That was INCREDIBLY hot. 🔥🔥🔥
8/27/25, 9:39 AM
Will you continue this at some point, it was one of my favorites.

8/27/25, 10:43 PM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) Thanks for checking in. I have to admit that my motivation to write has unfortunately been pretty low for some time due to work stress and other matters. I did started up on writing the next chapter for a bit, but the inspiration just hasn't been strong enough to chug out the words as I would have liked to. I do have every intention to continue and finish this series...and I know it's probably my most popular piece on here...but I just can't make any promises on when I could get that through. Sorry to keep you waiting, but I hope to be able to continue this some time soon enough.
Aug 23, 2025
mbblover
8/27/25, 9:20 PM
thanks Kyle for the quick response.. Yes, I am aware of the superman versus the frat boys story (5 chapters in all)... great story that revolves around superman spanked with bondage, spanking, eroticism and power control reversal going on. NO actual sex acts occur except for superman getting hard and orgasming once from the stimulation...the story is still available on various sites... My story idea which I think is right up your alley is far different. If you would like I can send you a synopsis/outline of the story in my next reply...
8/27/25, 8:52 PM
Really hot reading him rationalize these gayer and gayer behaviors to himself. I like the little reminders of hot aspects of their bodies (like Jay’s broad chest or masculine scent). The dissociative overlays on Dak’s experience (the experimental device, the Commander Jackson scenes) don’t do much for me personally, but I suppose they help the story along. Great stuff, thanks for posting!
8/27/25, 8:48 PM
OMG I would love to go to that show!
8/27/25, 8:14 PM
im LOVING this. I REALLY want to see Josh pimping Mike our to another guys.
8/27/25, 6:05 PM
Queremos otra buena historia. Marky debe de ser destruido
8/27/25, 5:01 AM
Malcolm makes sense. Clearly Ryan is struggling with acceptance so a more mature adult opens the door more than his teammates would as his first encounter

8/27/25, 7:56 AM
@[Viper-1](/user/show/10021969) you get it :-D

8/27/25, 5:27 PM
@[Viper-1](/user/show/10021969) @[Aramane](/user/show/10041848) In that case it would also explain why it cannot be the coach. The coach pushes him more "softly", manipulating and preventing him from fighting back. If Ryan knew that the coach thinks of him the same thing, then he wouldn't trust him to be "objective" or believe that his instructions are completely professional and nothing more
8/26/25, 3:24 PM
If you've got it in you to do another chapter, the "Jake taking a couple of pairs home to his brother and father" is a seriously hot thread you've left dangling.

8/27/25, 2:40 AM
@[TheMirrorCrack'd](/user/show/10021451) Shhhh...you'll spoil the third chapter that I'm currently working on. Hope to have it finished and posted by tomorrow and then any future installments (if any) will wait until after the U.S. Labor Day holiday. My boyfriend will kill me if I spend all weekend writing (though he is one of my biggest fans).

TheMirrorCrack'd
8/27/25, 3:58 PM
@[chiboxerboi](/user/show/909346) Looking forward to it. Love a well written story like this
8/27/25, 1:43 PM
thank you Jack! this is one of the best stories I've read and I've been a fan of your series for a while. I didn't quite imagine I would fall for Pete as a character more than Sammy, the character development was insane. where do I find more of them?