Recent Comments

11/28/25, 5:14 AM
Great story.

11/28/25, 5:18 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Bik
11/28/25, 2:56 PM
It's a small thing but I'm living for the increasingly ridiculous ways to write Mom out of the story! It's so funny

11/28/25, 5:06 PM
@Bik I wanted to write that she was trapped on a roller coaster in one chapter but I couldn’t figure out a way to write it in!
11/19/25, 6:10 AM
Please continue! This is a fantastic series

11/28/25, 3:55 PM
@[Btm-1](/user/show/1436527) Don't worry the final chapter is coming up
11/22/25, 7:34 PM
Just can’t understand how somebody can leave a story, half of written and not add more to it in over a month

11/28/25, 3:54 PM
@[msplatx](/user/show/10033164) Currently writing both the good and bad ending, but life has been quite busy for me
11/28/25, 1:11 PM
Sweet, holesome, tantalizing. I'm in lust with this story at the first taste and hungry for more!
11/28/25, 8:47 AM
Great start.
Anonymous
11/28/25, 8:26 AM
Hope this gets more ! I’m curious if his business partner would be gay and see him as a sex dog , or straight and just start petting him when brought in completely obviously he is his former partner as the dog begs for help
Anonymous
11/28/25, 7:18 AM
Ok, I'm too curious after rereading the chapters and I want to think of some ideas for what exactly Master's plan is: 1. Master wants to use Jamie's power as fuel for latex creation 2. Seems fitting to me that a light and shadow based combo could work well 3. Maybe it could work recursively for future hero drones? It's probably a lot bigger than any of these, but I am *very* curious
11/28/25, 6:16 AM
Ooooh, love it. The element of magic and mystery at the end is really exciting--love the brief peek we get of Fred being brainwashed into a kitchen king--and you have a real knack for capturing characterization. Can't wait to see the rest of the feast. :D
11/28/25, 5:06 AM
Great start!