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8/29/22, 3:33 AM
What an amazing series. I especially love the way you wrote the ending.
Evan
8/28/22, 11:16 PM
What a chapter! There are a lot of threads coming together. So much double-talk too, whether intentional or unknowingly. With Marin leading Jasper to a meeting with his friends thinking they were just getting to know one another. Rhys and Anthix pointing out strangeness in Jasper's taking to pet life and a very believable interpretation of why for Rhys given neither knows of the meddling with Jasper's mind. Every time Rhys considers that Jasper could be using him - that we know isn't the case - my heart hurts just like his does. If only he could have seen that interaction in the roof garden. But could he believe it wasn't all an act with the crew in on it. That's the trouble with trust, isn't it? I am both excited by and dreading the plan to discover and prove that Jasper has had his mind altered. It's true but he's just so happy and I fear Rhys is going to get the blame from Anthix, the crew, and Jasper. Not only that but Rhys fearing that Jasper only loves him because he was programmed to and not because there was genuine affection there even before the memory machine and subsequent training. Hopefully he can remember their early interactions before the training took hold. I think that's my biggest apprehension. Naturally, conflict is where drama happens but I just want them all to be happy and get along. So, again, excited and dreading the tension and aching hearts of what I imagine may happen. The crew infiltrating the school labs will be interesting too. Can they pull it off? Jasper's plan was great if only Rhys hadn't recognised him so it should work even better with these unknowns. Except Iskios, since they met in the slums. But then, what are the chances Rhys is visiting the campus again when a heist is going down. I really love that Jasper can feel happy where he is and still feel he's doing good with Rhys for the place he came from. Julian being the one most pissed off is deliciously amusing to me given it was his appearance that helped train Jasper into this mindset in the first place. That must be a little confusing for Jasper even though he consciously knows it wasn't really Julian. There's so much more to talk about but it's just gushing. Sex scenes with bonding, acceptance, exhibitionism, tenderness. Then there's all the delicious character stuff to enjoy. So good. Thank you both for another chapter. Loved it.

8/29/22, 3:11 AM
@Evan From @Cuddle-switch who doesn't want to log onto his computer: I'm really glad that you're picking up on the subtleties and dualities of things like the double meanings. It's really encouraging and delightful to have such an attentive reader. And also, I agree, Julian is always amusing. This was our first foray into specifically exhibitionism for the sake of exhibitionism. I feel like it went well and I'm glad that you agree. From me: Obviously I live to cradle your tender feelings in my hand and squoosh them ;). Honestly, I'm right there with you with the tenderness and heartbreak of what might happen with these lovely fools. This chapter is the official start of Act II as far as I'm concerned! Potentially big changes afoot! Thank you so much for the care and attention that you put into reading this story.
TakanashiRikka
8/28/22, 11:34 PM
Espero puedas continuar con tu historia, me gustó mucho y ansío leer más de ella
8/28/22, 11:16 PM
No me gustó, muy desagradable
8/28/22, 10:59 PM
Please continue. Maybe there are other 'special" pizzas available?
8/28/22, 10:55 PM
Where can I get some of that ointment? Maybe another Ben Gay story sometime?
8/28/22, 7:06 PM
Great story, really well written. You have a gift.
8/28/22, 4:47 PM
love the sub / dom tension in freddy
8/28/22, 7:44 AM
I am curious about a few things. One, when is this story coming back for another chapter and will it have an ending? Two, what is the ratio of straight to bi to gay now? I feel like there is almost no straight people but the changes I thought made 30% of people gay, but maybe I remembered wrong. Three, I know this is probably the wrong site to ask this, but with the sexercise edit, can we see how more of the women are getting buff as well? Finally, is Sam going to end up gay/bi or is he always going to be this "straight" person with a heavily altered conception of straight? Great work as always, though I can't wait for the next chapter.

8/28/22, 3:03 PM
@RainbowMika91 Thanks! There is an ending planned and I have the next chapter in drafts. No hard dates though -- this story gets harder to write the longer it goes. The stakes feel higher and I'm juggling a ton of elements. There are a bunch of edits dealing with those ratios, especially at San Amaro. 90% of people experiment in college, which means most people are at least up for a gay fling, especially with some other San Amaro-specific changes (the butt edits, horny water, etc). 30% of guys become gay in college, but that doesn't include people who are already gay. So probably 40-50% of San Amaro students would identify as gay. The rest are mostly bi, functionally. There are still straight people (even a few who have 0 interest in even experimenting), but they aren't really the focus of the story which might be skewing the perception of the world. There will be some very minor mentions of a buff female pertinent to the story, but again, very small role so I don't want to overhype it. I'm not spoiling anything for Sam's fate at this point. :wink:
8/28/22, 2:29 PM
this is just incredibly fantastic. WELL DONE ...