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8/17/22, 8:30 AM
What can I say, I'm a sucker for a good ending. The sex scenes where hot as usual and I think it was a very interesting way to develop the lore of the tribe and the lore of DubCon Corp. It also showed a great deal of Jared's personality, proving that he always had ill intentions, so it wasn't caused by the transformation mental change while also showing his will power and setting his way to villainy. In some ways I think this ending can explain Jared's need of a manly son and his insistence on humiliating others and exploiting them. One thing I should mention is that I think you have a misspelling in one of the lines: "He realised that he could cum anytime he wanted, that the Wiraqocha did not need to fuck for as long as they did, but they simply ++**embarrassed**++ the pleasure of doing what came naturally to them". I think you meant to say embraced instead of embarrassed. But that's not a biggy.

8/17/22, 9:38 AM
@Reader thanks :) While I enjoy Jared's original journey to becoming Mr Booker, I think this humiliation and set-back is really the catalyst that turns him from jerk to full villain, and deepens why he is obsessed with masculinity and dom/sub roles. Thank you for mentioning, fixed it :)
8/17/22, 5:28 AM
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8/17/22, 5:16 AM
Also. It’s just genuinely hot. SS rimming CC’s hairy globes! I’m really looking forward to learning… what is CC? Is he straight? (I don’t think that actually exists here—-I think we’re in an mpreg universe personally.) is he a otter?—who dreams of bulking and retiring on Bear River? What would most humiliate him in the HHC?! I’m here for this!
8/17/22, 5:12 AM
Bro! Just binged the series. So good! I know humor isn’t the point on this site. But I love a funny story, one that gets the weirdness of the narrative or out kink. That works when the author is aware that’s what he’s and embraces it. (Tho with others. often it’s boring.) But you have corners the market on hot and GOOFY! The worldbuilding of Himbotown, HH, Twinktown, Straightsylvania—are there women there, or just prude men? The commitment to the noir voice! And puns (“once the heighest form of humor” -bill from True Blood; “Yeah, More Puns!” Charlotte York as seen on SNL), so many puns! —I literally stopped reading (kept jerking off) to figure out Ballmark Card! — and the weird flex to the Marvel universe in that EVERYone has double initials! But it’s also hot. I love SS. CC in the Stall trading off between two dicks. (OH he’s a private dick. Not a private dic. Classic!) all of the veins and girth descriptions and descriptions of where the cum landed. It’s so very sexy. But your premise and execution maintains the overall silliness of the “noir gai” And I Am HERE for it. (I really do want to turn this into a spoken word performance/recording of this. It SCREAM for an audio book.
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8/17/22, 3:41 AM
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8/17/22, 1:19 AM
E - I love lactation
8/16/22, 11:34 PM
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8/16/22, 11:06 PM
You're really one of the best writers on this site. Please never stop making stuff, even if that stuff isn't always going to be hot gay fantasy stories for us perverts.
8/16/22, 7:53 PM
I think some changes on the professor would be nice too, make him incentive his studants to have sex often... As he is being fucked himself
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8/16/22, 7:45 PM
Another great step forward in Joaquin’s education. Bravo! It’s kind of sad that Luc didn’t end up breeding him, but maybe that’s for when he comes crawling back for more later on 😈 Please keep up the great (and super hot) work!