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Anonymous
8/13/22, 7:07 PM
I alive to sever the venus.
Aug 13, 2022
8/13/22, 8:26 AM
This story was fantastic. Honestly one of the best I read in a while (and I read almost everything hypno). My only criticism is that it’s a one-off and it’s soooo well written and hot I wish there were more parts to it. With such an easy method of mind control the MC could really have a bit more fun. Why stop at big bro?

8/13/22, 5:44 PM
@Mstr4slvs Thanks for the high praise! To answer your question, I never really plan for my stories long term. I usually just start with an idea and go from there, and this one was no exception. I wanted to do a story about a younger brother controlling his older bro, and once I wrote it, I'm on to the next story lol. That's just how I work. I do like to leave things open-ended, because I'm never sure if I'll ever revisit something (it does happen every now and then), but as of right now, I think Junior and Rider are good where they are. But you never know!:wink:

8/13/22, 6:34 PM
@MstGay3000 Yes I figured. It’s just that this is one of the hottest storied posted for a little bit. Can’t blame me for wanting more of it!
Anonymous
8/13/22, 5:50 PM
the infecting of Josiah is short and sweet but super hot… hits all the right buttons!!!
Aug 13, 2022
8/13/22, 4:53 AM
Man you really know how to push my buttons! Wish I could support you on patreon <3

8/13/22, 5:38 PM
@Udems:heart:
AAA
8/13/22, 5:34 PM
I... wow. I just keep jerking off to this. Amazing story, and superlative chapter.
Anonymous
8/13/22, 6:13 AM
I think it would be better without the images. They're offputting

8/13/22, 4:51 PM
I think the images are nice visuals. 😈 What a premise for this story! And such a mindfuck, wow. 😎

8/13/22, 5:30 PM
@NeedControlling Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! :grin: I really enjoyed squeezing the last out of poor Eric! If you don't mind answering; the transitions were intentionally confusing (the gaps between particular 'Erics'), but were they too jarring? I'm not convinced my pacing is my strongest skill, but I would greatly appreciate any feedback from someone who went into the story blind.
Anonymous
8/13/22, 5:14 PM
Is uri into hypermasculine smoking bearded Dom men? I wonder... maybe
8/13/22, 5:12 PM
Good story, but I would have liked to have seen more with the diaper stuff.
8/13/22, 4:46 PM
Fantastic. I’m a fan of yours. I really think this story is amazing. You take me back to reruns of my favorite cartoon. I have the power, will always be a magical phrase. I love the creativity and the sex rocks as well. Superman on his knees, is a sight I love to see. I can’t wait to meet the Avians. Lex has been messing around in a few of your stories. I’m patiently waiting for his takedown. PS… If my storywriter could write a crossover . I have a guy I would love to “teach” Damian the meaning of how to serve. "That's the gift for submitting...that is why you serve." Still rings true. 😁
8/13/22, 3:27 PM
Jack always rewards us with a great story