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7/26/22, 4:23 PM
Really loved the progression of how his mind slipped and his body changed to the suggestions of the anthro! I love a slow burn like that and the descriptions were phenomenal. I don’t know if you took inspiration or if you read Nex Anima Canis’ story before but it had a vibe similar to his old stories settled in school (that’s a big compliment!). Loved the corruption aspect of the transformation and the details of how big he was changing and growing! I hope to read more of your stories in the future!

7/26/22, 4:34 PM
@Bigger Thanks for the compliment! I absolutely took inspiration from NAC's Knothole High series, as well as jockedguy's [I Saw This Bro](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/1471056) series. In a way this story is like a fusion of both of those ideas, but I tried to take it a step farther in this case by intentionally making the outcome a bit darker. I did like how KH improved all of its main characters in one way or another by making them happier, more confident, etc etc. And while I enjoy that a lot, I wanted to intentionally turn the main character into a bully instead of just a himbo dogboy. So this was a lot of fun. Thank you again for the support! Have a good one.
7/26/22, 3:16 PM
Interesting to see how it could be turned into a film or TV Series 😉🤔💡🤫🤭🤗🤐🙊👍👏🎆🎇📺📽️🎥🎞️🎬🎭🖨️⌨️💻💰🔏🤯😎🤑✍️🏋️👴 💒💍🛫🗼🥂✍️👷🛠️💈✂️💇‍♂️💪skinhead punk cigar Smoking vulgar Mussel construction workers Delivery guy Doctor being corrupted Larry can be turned into so many things with many corrupting vices & swearing And what could Zack & Jonathan become? I like the flip/flop of personalities,so many choices How about 2 religious guys selling converting that knocked at Pryors door what they can do for him & the guys & what can happen to them & what they can be corrupted to " Get Busy, You Have A Career Ahead Of You, & You're Welcome!
7/26/22, 2:17 PM
Ooh that was hot!! Love that Russell is having the time of his life 🥵
Gasuda
7/26/22, 6:29 AM
I think this is one of my favorite stories ever. Axel and Tao are so well-written, and the way you slowly unveiled their world kept me hooked. Also, I really enjoyed the veteran bits - it almost seems like you might have some military experience yourself. I hope you win the cumpetition!

7/26/22, 1:41 PM
@Gasuda This is such high praise! There’s little I love more than drawing readers in to real characters and an immersive world. I’m glad it pulled you on, and I hope to keep accomplishing the same thing. I don’t have any military experience, but I have a good sense for the vibe that draws people into the idea. I hate it as a concept in the real world, but as a set piece for kink for someone who adores sadism/masochism, it’s perfect. I’m looking forward to diving more into the kinkified military in some Collar stories. I ended up getting third place, which I’m super proud of! Thanks for reading and commenting—I live off of this kind of feedback.
7/26/22, 8:01 AM
Omg dude I’m loving this so far! Me and my cock cant wait for the rest of he series to be released ;)

7/26/22, 8:03 AM
Here’s hoping that they don’t get out safe and sound and that we get an epilogue of them getting in an orgy 20 years from now still as sex slaves 🥵@Jdog

7/26/22, 12:46 PM
@Jdog wait and see ;)

7/26/22, 1:24 PM
Ooh I will 🥵 @GoonNoob
7/26/22, 9:05 AM
You truly are a master at writing humiliation. It’s incredible really. Looking forward to more.

7/26/22, 11:28 AM
Thank you @Mrdick, there's only more humiliation to come ;)
7/26/22, 3:48 AM
This is so inventive, even in the second chapter. I love the rapid descent into horny madness, and I need fan art of this village so bad.

7/26/22, 11:26 AM
@Gay Chaste me too!
7/25/22, 7:34 AM
As soon as I saw the authors name I knew this was going to be a great story and I was not wrong - yes slow start but if your other stories are anything to go by, I know this is going to be another classic . So I look forward to new chapters being posted - thanks

7/26/22, 6:53 AM
@MalSkin Thanks mate. Your kindness means a lot to me because when I first started writing on this site I got beef for my spelling mistakes and inelegant grammar, your encouragement kept me writing. So I feel a bit like Davy when getting a compliment from his guvnor. Respect, BoSS, respect!
7/26/22, 5:43 AM
Great story! Loved when the dad started losing control. Loved the milk feeding and the reunion between dad and son. Looking forward to more!
7/26/22, 5:33 AM
Great story! Loved when the dad started losing control. Loved the milk feeding and the reunion between dad and son. Looking forward to more!

Kybal Lutra
7/26/22, 5:35 AM
Thank you so much for reading it! :)