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7/26/22, 3:16 PM
Interesting to see how it could be turned into a film or TV Series ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ’ก๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŽ†๐ŸŽ‡๐Ÿ“บ๐Ÿ“ฝ๏ธ๐ŸŽฅ๐ŸŽž๏ธ๐ŸŽฌ๐ŸŽญ๐Ÿ–จ๏ธโŒจ๏ธ๐Ÿ’ป๐Ÿ’ฐ๐Ÿ”๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿค‘โœ๏ธ๐Ÿ‹๏ธ๐Ÿ‘ด ๐Ÿ’’๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ›ซ๐Ÿ—ผ๐Ÿฅ‚โœ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘ท๐Ÿ› ๏ธ๐Ÿ’ˆโœ‚๏ธ๐Ÿ’‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ’ชskinhead punk cigar Smoking vulgar Mussel construction workers Delivery guy Doctor being corrupted Larry can be turned into so many things with many corrupting vices & swearing And what could Zack & Jonathan become? I like the flip/flop of personalities,so many choices How about 2 religious guys selling converting that knocked at Pryors door what they can do for him & the guys & what can happen to them & what they can be corrupted to " Get Busy, You Have A Career Ahead Of You, & You're Welcome!
7/26/22, 2:17 PM
Ooh that was hot!! Love that Russell is having the time of his life ๐Ÿฅต
Gasuda
7/26/22, 6:29 AM
I think this is one of my favorite stories ever. Axel and Tao are so well-written, and the way you slowly unveiled their world kept me hooked. Also, I really enjoyed the veteran bits - it almost seems like you might have some military experience yourself. I hope you win the cumpetition!

7/26/22, 1:41 PM
@Gasuda This is such high praise! Thereโ€™s little I love more than drawing readers in to real characters and an immersive world. Iโ€™m glad it pulled you on, and I hope to keep accomplishing the same thing. I donโ€™t have any military experience, but I have a good sense for the vibe that draws people into the idea. I hate it as a concept in the real world, but as a set piece for kink for someone who adores sadism/masochism, itโ€™s perfect. Iโ€™m looking forward to diving more into the kinkified military in some Collar stories. I ended up getting third place, which Iโ€™m super proud of! Thanks for reading and commentingโ€”I live off of this kind of feedback.
7/26/22, 8:01 AM
Omg dude Iโ€™m loving this so far! Me and my cock cant wait for the rest of he series to be released ;)

7/26/22, 8:03 AM
Hereโ€™s hoping that they donโ€™t get out safe and sound and that we get an epilogue of them getting in an orgy 20 years from now still as sex slaves ๐Ÿฅต@Jdog

7/26/22, 12:46 PM
@Jdog wait and see ;)

7/26/22, 1:24 PM
Ooh I will ๐Ÿฅต @GoonNoob
7/26/22, 9:05 AM
You truly are a master at writing humiliation. Itโ€™s incredible really. Looking forward to more.

7/26/22, 11:28 AM
Thank you @Mrdick, there's only more humiliation to come ;)
7/26/22, 3:48 AM
This is so inventive, even in the second chapter. I love the rapid descent into horny madness, and I need fan art of this village so bad.

7/26/22, 11:26 AM
@Gay Chaste me too!
7/25/22, 7:34 AM
As soon as I saw the authors name I knew this was going to be a great story and I was not wrong - yes slow start but if your other stories are anything to go by, I know this is going to be another classic . So I look forward to new chapters being posted - thanks

7/26/22, 6:53 AM
@MalSkin Thanks mate. Your kindness means a lot to me because when I first started writing on this site I got beef for my spelling mistakes and inelegant grammar, your encouragement kept me writing. So I feel a bit like Davy when getting a compliment from his guvnor. Respect, BoSS, respect!
7/26/22, 5:43 AM
Great story! Loved when the dad started losing control. Loved the milk feeding and the reunion between dad and son. Looking forward to more!
7/26/22, 5:33 AM
Great story! Loved when the dad started losing control. Loved the milk feeding and the reunion between dad and son. Looking forward to more!

Kybal Lutra
7/26/22, 5:35 AM
Thank you so much for reading it! :)
7/26/22, 12:50 AM
Honestly I appreciate the father/son "reconciliation" more than anything else in this story. Manly bonding at it's finest

Kybal Lutra
7/26/22, 5:35 AM
Hahah that might be the most unrealistic thing about this story! I'm glad you enjoyed it!