Recent Comments

DB
8/18/22, 5:07 PM
Great series! Keep going…or cumming!
8/18/22, 4:54 PM
The gays get the best real estate, once again. :laughing:
8/18/22, 4:49 PM
Very hot! But also so cute and sweet at the end :) Coach gotta take care of his boy <3
Anonymous
8/17/22, 11:59 PM
The Prince’s allies should be changed in the next chapter, I hope that you can change them to be younger or dumper.

8/18/22, 12:01 AM
@ I'll see what I can do there ;)

Anonymous
8/18/22, 4:47 PM
@BlazargusI like your story very much, so keep going!!!
8/18/22, 2:51 PM
Mpreg definitely!
Boomer
8/18/22, 1:03 PM
Please don't listen to the folks complaining about how dark it is. This was awesome and ticked so many boxes for me There are tons of more wholesome/softer mind control and transformation stories, but this one is serious, dark and horny as fuck. The villain winning is amazing, and the betrayal is hot as fuck

8/18/22, 1:47 PM
@Boomer Thank you so much! My personal tastes are all over the place; I draw the lines at some things, but I'm a big fan of both light and fun MC stories and full blown dark ones. I'm peeved by cop-out endings where everything just falls back into place, unless they're well set up. That said, I'm going to risk muddying the waters here and post a sequel which continues the story (despite not having planned to do so originally). It won't end quite so bleakly (only in a relative sense), but it should be a happy medium between brutally dark and warm and fuzzy. Hope it still lives up to your expectations!
NeNekoKun
8/18/22, 2:14 AM
I really liked this story. All Aren and Hugh's corruption was so well constructed. I was just kind of sad about what happened in the end, but in a twisted way, Aren and Hugh are together and will be able to stay that way for eternity.

8/18/22, 1:37 PM
@NeNekoKun Thanks for the praise! I think as far as this being originally intended as a one-shot goes, the dark ending was almost a must if the world was going to "continue on" after the close of the story.
8/18/22, 1:53 AM
Superb. The manipulation of titles or true names is the oldest of magics, and you did them justice in a truly desperate yet highly erotic story. Hugh probably deserved better, yes, but the ending demanded this to truly break and corrupt the hero. Kudos!

8/18/22, 1:34 PM
@Essex Thank you! It's reassuring to hear this!