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Anonymous
10/4/25, 2:35 AM
Your writing is incredible! This isn't just a chapter, it's a whole mini-story, and it's so engrossing. This is your best work yet: I love the unreliable narrator and I love your characters. This is genius work.
10/2/25, 9:18 PM
ok i have to admit that i waited for a "real" chapter before reading it and the fuckass framing device, lol. both are dotted with so much silly humor without losing the hot descriptions -- i'm truly enjoying the style! can't wait to see how you interpret the free space at the end, and there are lots of fun prompts along the way. i love seeing what people create from that kinktober calendar, no matter the medium

10/3/25, 9:55 PM
@[Razz TFs](/user/show/272667) Thank you so much! I'm glad the style is working for you! I was a little concerned about doing this screenplay/prose fusion, but I have been enjoying working on it for this particular challenge. (also, thanks for calling my stuff funny. i try)
10/3/25, 9:42 PM
I would love a side chapter that goes over all the drone mechanics and instructions. Also, i would love more chapters or you could do more story sets for different people.
10/3/25, 9:42 PM
Sean bienvenidos a la zona de comentarios, en esta ocasión Axel estará siendo el buzón con el que podrán poner todos sus comentarios. Esta vez será algo diferente, no serán cartas sino mensajes de texto, para que cada comentario que llegue haga vibrar ese celular bien metido en su culo, comenzando con este comentario. "Umm~ por favor me van ha hacer correrme" Nota: sin importar que haya pasado tiempo desde que publique los capítulos anteriores me gustaría saber su opinión y comentarios, muchas gracias.
10/3/25, 9:11 PM
Best chapter so far, love this series so much. Can’t wait t see where it goes from here :)
10/3/25, 8:11 PM
I love this story so much

10/3/25, 8:13 PM
@[Frstone](/user/show/42866) Glad to hear it! I wrote this one a while back and almost didn't share. I'll have to dig up more stories to share here.
9/3/25, 10:09 AM
Please don't stop writing this story. It's not your fault, this is not everyone else taste. It's hot!!!

10/3/25, 7:58 PM
@[Trina](/user/show/10059300) I appreciate the kind words. I will admit I have been second guessing if this story was too dark or mean spirited, so the support was much needed. I really do hope to continue this one!
10/2/25, 9:44 PM
This is fun. Hopefully, Theo will transform into Jasper when Jasper (now Theo) cums in him.

10/3/25, 7:54 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thank you for reading! I'm a long time fan of your legendary work, so it means a lot
9/29/25, 10:08 PM
Neat idea, and quite hot. I'm a softie, so I hope Jasper comes back and he and Theo (and maybe new!Theo...?) get to be together. <3

10/3/25, 7:51 PM
@[Sobek](/user/show/10012408) Thank you for reading! Glad you enjoyed. I'm also a sucker for a happy ending ❤️
10/3/25, 5:38 PM
Having Amir basically narrate and explain what was happening to his mind is probably the hottest thing I have ever read on here.