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7/22/22, 9:25 PM
The buildup was good, but 3 sentences of the sex was a bit of a downer, longer sex scenes would make it better
7/22/22, 8:25 PM
a great ending to a great series , im glad Marcus decided not to take the antidote and remain as he is . keep up the good writing GoonNoob
Oct 30, 2021
Thom
7/22/22, 6:10 PM
Hi there 👋 and thank you for your message. I actually read that very story today as well and loved it. I located your story site through the link you had provided here and added it to my home screen. I just re-read The Spirit of the Bear, which is a story that I truly loved from the first time I read it years ago. 🐻

7/22/22, 6:38 PM
@Thom That's going Waaaaaaaaay back. LOL Glad you found it again.

Anonymous
7/22/22, 6:49 PM
@Papa Werebear Me too. I am looking forward to re-visiting some of your stories and reading your newer ones too.

7/22/22, 7:14 PM
@ Heh... I need to get some new Chad out.
Harry Blue
7/22/22, 7:11 PM
Omg this is the thing of dreams ...to literally BECOME rubber ...a human rubber being. Perfect.
Thom
7/22/22, 10:23 AM
What a truly wonderful, passionate story. I have enjoyed your stories for a long time on various forums, and am so glad to find them here too 🐻🐻🐻. Thank you so much for sharing your gift.

7/22/22, 6:41 PM
@Thom Half the credit goes to Graham. :wink:
7/22/22, 5:37 PM
Great start! Bottom daddies are the best 👏👏👏 Can't wait for more
7/21/22, 8:06 AM
This series is so good! Pete is just iconic. :grin: This story is just so clever. You have all the classic motifs of the fairytales, but presented in a new way. Phenomenal stuff!

7/22/22, 5:21 PM
@Norismo High praise coming from you, Norismo! And that you like Pete is definitely the highest praise indeed, as you inspired me to create him.
7/22/22, 8:07 AM
Another fantastic chapter! Here's to hoping the family just keeps growing!

7/22/22, 5:17 PM
@Norismo Thank you Norismo-chan! I can definitely promise that at the very least. Thank you for reading!
7/22/22, 3:37 PM
This is a really exciting first chapter. I’m waiting a second chapter with baited breath. If I had one comment for the author, it would be that there’s a lot of “telling” in the chapter, and not as much “showing.” In other words, we are told directly about the Thyjar and what it does, rather than experiencing it from the point of view of the characters, which can sometimes be a little more effective. Can’t wait for chapter 2!

7/22/22, 5:00 PM
@Bound_Up_Boy Thanks for the comment! I totally agree with what you are saying. This chapter turned into more of a narrative prelude than I had intended. Chapter 2 is just waiting for validation and I'd like to think that the balance is far better there! As things progress we should be getting further away from abstract description. Thanks again for the support 😄
7/22/22, 4:31 PM
Nice start, fun elements. Love the Booty Flower element. Also LOVE the whole gapping hole kept open thanks to the pressure/pleasure they feel as they get pulled away and escorted. There is something sexy of a nicely, but not too vastly, gapped hole! Also blissed out faces is super hot. Looking forward to seeing what happens next! Hope for some more rimming, hehe, and also one of them or the first expedition coming out ahead.