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7/17/22, 2:03 PM
Nice! Very good tease! Felt like it ended just when it was getting good. I would’ve loved to have heard more about Arthur’s body or the changes to the narrator’s behaviour over the week caused by Arthur. Are you continuing this story? Have you already on your Patreon?

7/17/22, 4:53 PM
@MonsterMash62 I did try writing a follow up chapter. Unfortunately Arthur kind of screwed me over when he moved out… Every time I have attempted writing another chapter, all my rage and hostility towards him comes out and spoils the story. Due to this, I have left it as a stand alone story.

7/17/22, 5:12 PM
@DuskSkullKing I can relate to that. My last published story was basically me taking out my rage at someone. For this story, I feel like it could’ve been a lot more knife twisting, with the narrator humiliating his roommate and making him into something the roommate didn’t like.

7/17/22, 10:08 PM
@MonsterMash62 the only thing I want to do to him is turn him into an unfuckable freak. The only problem I have, is how I go from a budding master and fuckboi relationship to the fuckboi taking back control and retaliating against his master… 🤔
Jul 17, 2022
7/17/22, 8:01 PM
This was very hot!
Kiritimikado
7/17/22, 6:20 PM
Are you going to upload more utopia stories and I'd love to join T-Drone 107 please
7/17/22, 6:17 PM
This all story is absolutely wonderful, well written, very hot. Please, please go on. I am so grateful you wrote that first 4 episodes. Thank You so much
Jul 17, 2022
Swizzington
7/17/22, 5:31 PM
I don't usually go for stories which incorporate pictures because they're typically just random photographs of real people the writer has found on the internet somewhere. Because yours have a more cartoony, hand drawn style, I think they actually work a lot better. Thanks for posting!
7/17/22, 2:54 PM
Actually a good story, but please use paragraphs man. It's really hard to read x

7/17/22, 4:56 PM
@Sandancer1 Crap! I had to copy and paste it from my Patreon while on my my phone… I wrote it on my old laptop so I don’t have access to the original file 😒. I’ll fix it! Thanks for letting me know!
Anonymous
7/17/22, 4:49 PM
Love those mind changing gainer stories .Hope you continue the series. would love to see him to become a full flege gainer fatty
7/17/22, 4:08 PM
I really love the way you write the story. You are the best writer in this site for me !!
7/17/22, 3:54 PM
Here's other chapter ideas ! Pryer Getting Mad & Punishes His Guys & Masculines All. Aging them more like Pryer. "Getting Rid of All that Pretty -Boy Looks" Wild Hair Coloring & Hair & beard Styles. Shaving Head & Eyelashes. Many Piercings & Tattoos Cigar Smoking & Beer Guzzling & More Bad Habits. More Fetishes. Going to "Ben's Bar". & All that entails ! Meeting All Sorts Of Characters ! Also Day to Day All New Living arrangements ! Also Screwing Up Petersen Gals old lives. "Putting All That Mussel to work" for Pryer. Corrupting more Strangers Also Remember Larry is Looking for Guys for Pryer! Then there's Zach's Football career shenanigans. Also Pryer Suddenly Remembers Things & Shit Hits His Fans ! (Pun Intended). Just Think of All the possibilities ! Looking for much more perverted stories ! Proper Pryer Perverts proper English Language with fucked up cursed slang & looses his tenure! Steven turns into a feminine Hairdresser.