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Anonymous
7/15/22, 1:30 PM
Great story. Very interesting. Good job
7/15/22, 12:45 PM
Amazing new chapter! I like the idea of leaving Jackson as a mysterious force—plus, unlike most complete monsters, he has a degree of compassion and empathy, which is nice. We love the morally ambiguous characters! My only note would be to lower the amount of weight Colin gains: as it stands, he puts on *forty-five pounds* in the span of two weeks, which isn’t just almost impossible biologically, it raises the question as to why no one else at the college notices. Granted, it’s a fantasy story, but since Jackson doesn’t provide any kind of perception filter, it seems surprising that Colin ballooning up in the span of two weeks doesn’t raise any attention. But that’s a minor detail. It’s an amazing tale—take the time you need to finish it!
7/14/22, 1:39 PM
Thanks for this story. I found the extreme miniaturizing of the cock very erotic and I don’t think you took it to far. Would like to see what other body mods you could do maybe even to Brad.

7/15/22, 11:20 AM
@Titan thanks! Yeah I was thinking of hitting Brad with some changes. Any suggestions? Haha
7/15/22, 9:31 AM
So cool. I love your story :satisfied:
7/15/22, 9:13 AM
That’s great! I’ve read the first 2 chapters 4 times. Glad you’re back!
7/15/22, 6:27 AM
That dinner! I laughed so hard, I revel in such hijinks :revolving_hearts:
7/15/22, 6:06 AM
Really good chapter. I'm in this for the long haul! 🥰
boi98229
7/15/22, 5:09 AM
Wow! So sizzling hot and sweet, and absolutely spell-binding! (sperm-binding?) Perfect -- so looking forward to more if Xander's Dad doesn't somehow stop it. Thanks so much. Such an awesome story!
7/15/22, 2:30 AM
Such a treat! I loved that we got to know Xander a lot more and that they're becoming a throuple. I really love the dynamics that begin to grow between them and that Xander accepts them both as boyfriends and has taken them out on a date. The fact that he owns them and decides what they wear is super hot, and still, he values and cares for them, which I absolutely relate to. Now, as we get into the lore, there was a lot going on and I now can't wait to see what happens next, why Xander's dad was so against this and what really is going on. A fantastic job expanding one of my favorite classic stories!

7/15/22, 4:12 AM
@Essex Well you're going to like the next chapter then. As far as Alex senior that I thought should be clear from this part: He knows that his son could personally start a nanotech apocalypse if he just can't keep his dick in his pants. And he has already had to do things to prevent that from happening in the past. He absolutely does not want that to happen to his friend's family.