Recent Comments

Ken
6/25/22, 5:40 PM
This is definitely my favorite version of mafia. Makes me wish I had played it with my friends...maybe we still might :smirk:
Ken
6/25/22, 5:30 PM
The story had me hard from beginning to end! This was a great original story and I wish it was an entire drawn out series; let's impregnate the world!
Anonymous
6/25/22, 5:04 PM
Phenomenal
6/25/22, 3:53 PM
Excellent descriptive writing. Great detail without bogging the story down.
Anonymous
6/25/22, 3:46 PM
Holy shit. That's one of the best stories I've ever read on here
6/25/22, 3:18 PM
Great story. Interesting and creative plot. This chapter on its own is complete but it could be the start of a much longer story. Well done.
6/25/22, 3:07 PM
Just wanna point out, the story is in second person, not first as it is tagged
Anonymous
6/25/22, 3:04 PM
Counting down the days until Part 11
6/25/22, 3:02 PM
Wow. That was just a great confrontation with Donnie. Very creative and very hot. Excellent story overall. I loved every word of it.
Kip
6/25/22, 2:56 PM
Great ending!!! This was a fantastic ride, and it ended with an equally fantastic ride. The “nuclear arms race of anal sex” was an unbelievably inspired way to finally take Donnie down once and for all. What a climax!!!