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6/24/22, 8:48 AM
So good. You are a great writer and so creative. I love seeing all the weird places you take this story!
6/24/22, 8:44 AM
It’s 3 am, and I should be going to bed, but now I saw this and well… priorities. :rofl:
6/24/22, 7:30 AM
Wow! Domineering Daddy is one of my favourite tropes for sure. Now to wait for chapter 2 😁
6/22/22, 12:57 AM
Think we’d all be sad if this story never saw the grand finale it deserves

6/23/22, 5:58 PM
@Hdhshs it’s coming!! Proofreading now, next chapter will be submitted today. Next chapter will be proofread too and submitted this weekend. Then the epilogue next week wrapping it all up.

Anonymous
6/24/22, 3:09 AM
Martin: oh no! The site is being DOSed! Community: Nah, we're just repeatedly refreshing Edlam's author page :)

6/24/22, 3:11 AM
Hahahaha. Def give them some time, just edited in one paragraph at the end to provide a bit more of a connection to the epilogue 😜 so they’ll have to spend some time considering this is the longest chapter of the series.

6/24/22, 6:54 AM
That Anonymous comment literally saying what I had been doing all last week and this week :sweat_smile:
6/24/22, 6:34 AM
Awesome story!
Old man kisser
6/23/22, 10:36 PM
"Reed said, handing Ian a piece of paper, using that opportunity to get closer to him." Typo? or was tophers first draft name Ian?

6/24/22, 6:18 AM
@Old man kisser it was indeed, thank you for noticing, I fixed it!
Evan
6/24/22, 4:38 AM
Another magnificent chapter. The opening in particular was astonishing. The description of restraint and barriers crumbling was perfect. And now their dad too. Sammy is such a good influence.
Evan
6/24/22, 4:33 AM
Such a sweet story. I loved the happy ending.
Evan
6/24/22, 3:39 AM
So Viraj's mind constantly going back to Wyatt was art imitating life? I spent a lot of their time in the bleachers searching for a sign Wyatt was getting his own tattoo. And if the way they were interacting would inform it. Say, attached to his cock and leasing him to desire fucking and those seeing it craving to feel it in them. Inverse to Viraj's wanting to be fucked and having the glimpses want to poke him. Whether you continue course, do something new or weave some combination, I know it will be great and can't wait to read it.

6/24/22, 3:58 AM
@Evan the bearer of the tattoo will get like 3/10 obsessed with the person who saw it - a mild compulsion to do the deed with him. The person who saw it ramps up to 10/10 obsessed pretty quick. Things don’t always work the same though, as I alluded to with Kendrick. Also, Viraj is a bottom quite apart from the tattoo. That it landed in his ass was a happy coincidence for him :smile:
6/24/22, 3:38 AM
A brilliant end to a perfectly told and hot series. In the end, like all young men, unchecked hornyness will lead them to make poor decisions, and in this case, it proves to be their undoing as at the height of it, they just give in to it rather than fight it. And as Tyler gave in and was rewired to enjoy pleasure as a bottom, was his attraction to Ben forced or was he discovering what truly made his friend attractive to him? In the end, the Doc wins, and his greatest pleasure is our own, enjoying the manipulation of the young men for his voyeuristic/onanistic pleasure.