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6/23/22, 4:24 PM
Absolutely fantastic. Like Dream Maker said, this is a classic Hypnothrill horror tale: the sense of impending doom, the slow way the world is changing and no one can do anything about it…it feels like a question of WHEN you get completely corrupted, not IF. And then the change to outright sexual acts…it’s kinky to pretend, but imagine actually living in a world like this, and knowing that your sanity was in danger? Chilling!
6/23/22, 3:09 PM
I wonder which color of speedo clark will be wearing
6/23/22, 3:02 PM
This is both hot and scary.
6/23/22, 2:06 PM
This is really hot. The hypno-thrall-recruitment theme is one of my favorites!
6/23/22, 1:55 PM
Loved the story. Truly a great job.
6/23/22, 10:52 AM
Great story! Interesting to get one where the hypnotist himself is essentially asexual (or at least only gets off on the hypnosis power trip, rather than fucking the boys himself).
6/22/22, 10:20 PM
Awesome take on ... Thor and his hammer! Loved it!

6/23/22, 10:19 AM
Thanks@FreeThinker
6/23/22, 9:18 AM
I wish Lucus will have a chance to drink pink potion. I wouldlike to know what will happen to him.
6/23/22, 7:36 AM
Amazing stuff. More please please please
6/22/22, 8:52 AM
This is a fun story! The mechanic is a little complicated, so when reading I wondered, don’t the promises need to be worded as the opposite of whatever the promise-breaker wants (since it’s being broken)? The attempts "I promise I took off my clothes before I jumped in the shower" and "I promise my clothes are completely drrrrrrr—" don’t seem to fit that format, although they didn’t work out anyway. Is that just Chance messing it up as he starts out?

6/23/22, 7:32 AM
@drummer I wish I could say this was intentional, but alas, it is very much a continuity error I failed to catch when revising this story. I like the premise, but I did give myself a complicated job of trying to write a plot device that has to be the reverse of what it’s supposed to be. Especially when I, the writer, know it won’t actually happen, it’s tricky to conceptualize it so I didn’t reverse it the proper way. But that’s a me problem, and I appreciate you pointing it out. I won’t be changing it, so for the sake of argument, I’ll say that Chance did actually screw up. Based on the rules I’ve made up, those outcomes still would have happened as they did (maybe not, but let’s not pull that thread). He’s struggling just as much to get a grip on it, so his clumsy first attempts track nicely with his journey. Retconning to the rescue! :)