Recent Comments

10/4/25, 2:13 PM
One simple mistake: jock for jockstrap. And now the dominance is unleashed. Fuck I want more mistakes to manipulate these characters, especially Gabe.
10/4/25, 2:07 PM
Oh, this is so heart-wrenchingly beautiful. There’s a perverse thrill in the pain and bullying, mixed with this gnawing pity and despair. Thank you for this.
Anonymous
10/4/25, 1:16 PM
Thank you for this story, I like it very much if it s so close as possible to reality. And you human approach is absolutely my cup of tea.
9/30/25, 9:22 PM
So hot. So well structured! Great continuation to an already great story.

10/4/25, 1:14 PM
@[DadisTopped](/user/show/10031852) Thanks for the praise mate! Glad you enjoyed the second chapter
amazing slave
10/3/25, 12:13 PM
this is the hottest story, i hope there will be more hypnosis, leather and submission

Anonymous
10/4/25, 11:37 AM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) yes Master
10/4/25, 5:58 AM
Listen, this is not usually my kink, but like the other commenters have said the writing and plot and _care_ in this have me hooked. Thank you for this story.
10/4/25, 4:49 AM
Yes, once again, keep those chapters coming. I enjoy reading the story.
Anonymous
10/4/25, 2:35 AM
Your writing is incredible! This isn't just a chapter, it's a whole mini-story, and it's so engrossing. This is your best work yet: I love the unreliable narrator and I love your characters. This is genius work.
10/2/25, 9:18 PM
ok i have to admit that i waited for a "real" chapter before reading it and the fuckass framing device, lol. both are dotted with so much silly humor without losing the hot descriptions -- i'm truly enjoying the style! can't wait to see how you interpret the free space at the end, and there are lots of fun prompts along the way. i love seeing what people create from that kinktober calendar, no matter the medium

10/3/25, 9:55 PM
@[Razz TFs](/user/show/272667) Thank you so much! I'm glad the style is working for you! I was a little concerned about doing this screenplay/prose fusion, but I have been enjoying working on it for this particular challenge. (also, thanks for calling my stuff funny. i try)
10/3/25, 9:42 PM
I would love a side chapter that goes over all the drone mechanics and instructions. Also, i would love more chapters or you could do more story sets for different people.