Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/28/22, 3:54 PM
Please come out with the next installment already! The anticipation is killing me.
Anonymous
4/28/22, 10:07 AM
Are… is this… Muscle Twilight?

4/28/22, 2:56 PM
Oh god lol I didn’t think about the similarities. Going forward it won’t fall in line so much
4/28/22, 2:10 PM
Loved this so much! Pheromone stories are amazing and I was able to relate to that foot lust completely since I consider it more of a weakness, myself! I hope we get a part 2!
4/28/22, 1:25 PM
Really well written and really inventive. You were right, you do write wholesome stuff, just mixed in with sadness to. Like bittersweet chocolate.

Anonymous
4/28/22, 1:59 PM
@Norismo I’ll take it! 😊
4/28/22, 1:48 PM
Wow, this was so sad! So, so sad. Remarkably well written, this story made me feel things and will linger with me for a while. I have to say, is Pops the guard from before? I got the impression he was but if so, where is the son? Maybe I'll need to reread it.

Anonymous
4/28/22, 1:58 PM
@Norismo No, Pops is just the buyer of the defunct Gorilla; ‘the worker’ is just someone who quite his job for emotional reasons. Also, same with the “lingering”. Some of your work opened my brain up in ways I didn’t know there was hinges.
4/28/22, 12:08 PM
looking forewords to the next chapters
4/27/22, 7:29 PM
I like where this is going, if I may make a suggestion, why not setting Justin and Brian up as a couple?

Willie Cici
4/28/22, 2:58 AM
@darkblade2814 Keep reading!

4/28/22, 11:32 AM
@Willie Cici okay
4/28/22, 10:40 AM
This was beautiful and heart warming. The happy end we were all looking for, the depiction of body dysmorphia and the interesting concept of Avon - a country without gender, you managed to tie it all together in a cathartic final chapter. This was a rough story, a roller-coaster of emotions. Were I live, Sunday is the first day of the work week, and yet your story was so captivating that I was excited when Sundays came. Thank you!

4/28/22, 10:58 AM
@Reader Thanks for all your comments and feedback. Sorry for any anxiety along the way :sweat_smile: At least it all worked out well in the end.
4/28/22, 10:54 AM
Fantastic story and idea. Hot!!!
4/28/22, 10:07 AM
Oh wow. What a weird wholesome ending! You definitely have a unique style. I can't help but think this would be a fun series, attaching and detatching, wacky hikinks ensue... :laughing: