Recent Comments

4/24/22, 4:34 AM
How many more chapters you plan on doing? Will there be sexy stuff again?

4/24/22, 1:29 PM
@Leoscurse I'm not sure, it's nearing its end so not too many chapters left. Possibly 2-3? I hadn't planned on sexy stuff but now that you have said it, I think it would be quite hot to have a sex scene. Leave it with me, I'll see what I can stir up haha ;)

4/25/22, 3:29 AM
@Henry Wolf Still retaining dog characteristics, or still swing his bf as his owner and coming to terms with it if he has some sort of change back to some human form would be cool.

4/26/22, 10:07 PM
@Leoscurse Sounds hot!

4/27/22, 2:09 AM
@Henry Wolf for inspiration, you might like dog boys by Douglas Benjamin on kindle.

4/28/22, 4:08 PM
@Leoscurse Great minds! I've actually read a few of those, they're really good and very hot!
Anonymous
4/28/22, 3:54 PM
Please come out with the next installment already! The anticipation is killing me.
Anonymous
4/28/22, 10:07 AM
Are… is this… Muscle Twilight?

4/28/22, 2:56 PM
Oh god lol I didn’t think about the similarities. Going forward it won’t fall in line so much
4/28/22, 2:10 PM
Loved this so much! Pheromone stories are amazing and I was able to relate to that foot lust completely since I consider it more of a weakness, myself! I hope we get a part 2!
4/28/22, 1:25 PM
Really well written and really inventive. You were right, you do write wholesome stuff, just mixed in with sadness to. Like bittersweet chocolate.

Anonymous
4/28/22, 1:59 PM
@Norismo I’ll take it! 😊
4/28/22, 1:48 PM
Wow, this was so sad! So, so sad. Remarkably well written, this story made me feel things and will linger with me for a while. I have to say, is Pops the guard from before? I got the impression he was but if so, where is the son? Maybe I'll need to reread it.

Anonymous
4/28/22, 1:58 PM
@Norismo No, Pops is just the buyer of the defunct Gorilla; ‘the worker’ is just someone who quite his job for emotional reasons. Also, same with the “lingering”. Some of your work opened my brain up in ways I didn’t know there was hinges.
4/28/22, 12:08 PM
looking forewords to the next chapters
4/27/22, 7:29 PM
I like where this is going, if I may make a suggestion, why not setting Justin and Brian up as a couple?

Willie Cici
4/28/22, 2:58 AM
@darkblade2814 Keep reading!

4/28/22, 11:32 AM
@Willie Cici okay
4/28/22, 10:40 AM
This was beautiful and heart warming. The happy end we were all looking for, the depiction of body dysmorphia and the interesting concept of Avon - a country without gender, you managed to tie it all together in a cathartic final chapter. This was a rough story, a roller-coaster of emotions. Were I live, Sunday is the first day of the work week, and yet your story was so captivating that I was excited when Sundays came. Thank you!

4/28/22, 10:58 AM
@Reader Thanks for all your comments and feedback. Sorry for any anxiety along the way :sweat_smile: At least it all worked out well in the end.
4/28/22, 10:54 AM
Fantastic story and idea. Hot!!!