Recent Comments

10/3/25, 7:10 AM
Great work, want more of this! lots of exciting possibilities
9/28/25, 11:35 PM
Das ist eine spannende Geschichte, die sich schön zu einem Cliffhanger aufbaut. Jetzt will ich auch die Fortsetzung lesen ...

10/3/25, 6:10 AM
@[Portuguese Lion](/user/show/572598) @[Corin](/user/show/125990) Danke für die wohlwollenden Kommentare. Das motiviert mich gerade sehr, das nächste Kapitel fertigzustellen.
Oct 1, 2025
10/3/25, 5:28 AM
Really great story! Who doesn't love a townful of goons?!
10/3/25, 4:55 AM
I agree I am enjoying this story
10/3/25, 3:24 AM
Is there going to be more?
10/3/25, 2:45 AM
Is there going to be a continuation or is this the final chapter?
9/22/25, 1:20 PM
Interest? Yes! Please continue.

Jai
10/3/25, 12:42 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) On it! :)
10/2/25, 3:20 PM
Great to have you writing. Love this. Does Jay even remember his own name? Would love to read more from this universe.

10/2/25, 11:25 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you! We might see more from this universe, we'll see... Well, we'll see if we see more, by definition I s'pose.
10/2/25, 9:44 PM
Amazing story and writing!! Would love both Nathan’s perspective and to find out the true happenings of the facility.

10/2/25, 11:01 PM
@[MezzoKitten](/user/show/10040092) Thanks! I haven't put "pen to paper" yet on that, but I do think I want to write both of those stories.
10/2/25, 10:47 PM
This is actually very cute. Good for a one-shot, but it would definitely be interesting to see a follow-up