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8/20/25, 10:25 PM
it's been a long time since a story's given me a boner and made me laugh out loud at the same time :)
8/20/25, 6:12 PM
Very nice. Definitely need more chapters though

8/20/25, 6:15 PM
@[Allan Weiss](/user/show/472888) There's one more commissioned chapter in the works that's almost done
8/17/25, 5:10 AM
oh…. so it is really the final chapter ??

8/20/25, 5:41 PM
@[Gaeten5588](/user/show/10014337) There is an epilogue coming.
8/17/25, 2:13 PM
I was wondering what the numbered rooms were for! And I gotta say, this made some of the things Luthor has done in prior works look tame. Dark. But if you are going to take down the dark knight, you have to be just as dark. Yet, the writing for this was incredible. The pacing and the details were so on point it felt like it was coming from a book I bought at Barnes and Noble. I know this was a commission, yet I do have one question. Why reduce Bruce to such a basic state? Raj has altered a number of supers to his aims like Firestorm and J'onn. Would it have been too much of a risk to let Bruce keep his intellect?

8/17/25, 2:17 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Yes, Raj takes a good game but at heart he’s terrified by Bruce so he will keep him mindless to ensure he will stay tamed

8/17/25, 9:59 PM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) If Bruce was the last hero to fall, will there be an epilogue? Or is this when Talia comes into play?

8/20/25, 5:40 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) There is an epilogue, two in fact. One for a good ending and one for a bad one, so people get to pick which one they like more.
Elm
8/20/25, 2:50 PM
Lovely start! a hunky cockwhore of a cop is always a treat
Anonymous
8/20/25, 9:03 AM
I'm liking the basic premise, but the pacing worries me a little. Just one chapter in and Stanson has already pretty much completely succumbed, and none of the rest of the officers seem eager to put up much resistance. I guess that means the central conflict is going to revolve around this "Arx Humana" group, but personally I think it's a bit of a waste not to draw out the conversion of the police force more. That said, this was definitely hot! I always appreciate it when drones get to have big, rubberized, *superior* cocks instead of being stuck in chastity forever.

8/20/25, 12:39 PM
@Anonymous I'd assert that XOR is a corporation akin to Tyrell Corporation in Blade Runner or Weyland-Yutani in the Alien universe. So as much as Stanson has control of the station, XOR and its drone have power over Stanson.
8/20/25, 11:57 AM
I hope there is more to cum from this
Aug 16, 2016
Anonymous
8/20/25, 11:33 AM
nice hardening story
8/20/25, 11:33 AM
Oh I like this, not so much the body swap idea, but the rivalry and the golden boy air that oozes off Devon. Love the contrats between them. Which would make it so much better when the 'loser' humiliates the golden boy. I know in tags it says no sex, but any chance Ziggy can get a hold of a mind control device or blackmail to enslave and humiliate Devon in a bad ending? Would love to see him brought down bada t the hands of someone he sees as inferior!
8/20/25, 9:56 AM
Looking forwards to this. Going to be interesting to see what XOR is capable of, and why it chooses to confine itself to the treaty.