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4/6/22, 4:04 PM
A classic absman "power at a price" story- I can think of few other authors who so deftly wed the fantasy of easy physical perfection with loss of autonomy and even personal identity, to the point that at this point, I kind of expect the guy to get mentally enslaved by the end.

4/7/22, 9:32 PM
@ParadoxBear That would help in my effort to use fewer words! On the other hand, imagine I wrote a story with lots of muscle growth and a happy ending -- people wouldn't know what to do!
4/7/22, 9:18 PM
Nice to read some hot foot action! Simple but a very relatable setup that we wished we could all have such a roommate at our disposal! ;)
Anonymous
4/7/22, 7:14 PM
Wow, loved it. would love to read the rest of it. I wonder if Casey will end up going and ending up tattooed and pierced himself.
4/7/22, 6:55 PM
Can't wait to see what Casey and Brother David get up to
4/6/22, 3:52 PM
The concept is fun and original, and the twist that these men can never find companionship within their fraternity adds a poignancy that deepens the story beyond what could have been an enjoyable but straightforward fantasy about scent play, mind control, and masculinization. I like that you didn't give Tony an easy answer to his problems.

4/7/22, 5:31 PM
@ParadoxBear Thank you for the very thoughtful comment. Life has no easy answers. Struggle is the only thing we all share.
4/7/22, 4:23 PM
I found this one a big of a slog compared to the others, but a slog in the context of a series with high standards (and I haven't even got to your current ones yet. _Jesus Christ!_) Also, I came so explosively while reading, that I think almost slipped a disc. So, that'll be 5/5 for 'wanking material' then... ...five dicks out of five, and a trip to the doctors.
Apr 4, 2022
StonedGainer
4/7/22, 3:49 PM
Good to see ya back and making quality smut!
4/7/22, 3:44 PM
Yeah., just passing into the next chapter, the dynamic was spicier here. There's character, but it's not shoved too far forward for the sex stuff. Interesting read.
Anonymous
4/7/22, 3:37 PM
Was there ever a continuation of this?!? such a promising start…
4/7/22, 3:26 PM
Great stuff. I like the repetition of dialogue. It becomes a great pacing mechanism for the story. The reader reading experiences Henry's influence recounted in stages, and the whole story feels like one long and coherent pre-sex scene. An exquisite example of 'Hot'ness specifically.