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Anonymous
3/20/22, 10:03 PM
So hot, I went into a trance just reading it
Private 3256
3/20/22, 12:01 PM
It was great to see an old favourite story get updated, and made hotter. I found myself almost joining in with the call/response. Did you ever do that school/cadet story?

3/20/22, 9:43 PM
@Private 3256 Thank you for the comment. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it. Between you and Anonymous I see that my call/response technique actually did what it should. Haven't gotten to the cadet story, although like I said above, my CYOC story is coming to something akin to that, so that will have to serve as a substitute.
5/13/20, 4:07 AM
@bucke: Thank you for your support; it definitely seems like I'll have three stories in rotation: Army in Black, Soldier Slave, and Bargain: Rank and File. So I'll be moving among the three. I'll probably get back to working on the next section of one of the three this weekend (I have some work related writing to deal with over the next couple of days). Which one of the three I'll go to I can't really say. We're kindred spirits as I too have a love of uniforms, so it's a theme in the stories I write. I look forward to seeing your comments and support for the work I put out. I actually have an idea about a school that slowly turns the student body into cadets ready to go into the military, so it's something for you to look forward to. Again thanks for your support and encouragement; I'll try to do you proud.

Anonymous
3/20/22, 11:58 AM
Did you ever write that cadet tranceformation story? Soldier Slave is an old favourite story to read, and it was great to see it updated.@New Guy in Town

3/20/22, 9:37 PM
@Anonymous Unfortunately, no. I have so many ideas and I'm in a bit of a writing rut, so not making much progress on the writing front. I actually have something close to that in the CYOC storyline I've written so once I put that up that'll be the closest to that idea. But I thank you for enjoying my update to Soldier Slave; I definitely need to get back to writing more for it since you gave such kind words of support.
3/20/22, 9:29 PM
I have not read anything this hot and creative in a long time. Just an amazing story! Good job.
Anonymous
3/20/22, 9:06 PM
Wow... amazing story. I beg you to please do more with it! ...omg wow...
3/20/22, 8:44 PM
I love this story so much, it’s so hot.
3/20/22, 8:44 PM
I'm not a giant fan of weight gain stories but it being contrasted with his previous athlete life was super hot. Very well written!
3256
3/20/22, 8:34 PM
I spent along time living in Aldershot, I’ve drunk in the Beehive before it closed down, avoided the Goose (being a local rather than a squaddie) used to live quite close to those bus station toilets. All of the locations felt familiar to me, so much so that I could actually navigate in my head the routes taken in the story.
3/19/22, 6:59 AM
Aww I would have definitely kept Hans around.

3/20/22, 7:31 PM
@Trotskisaurus No fear, all you have to do is start a Turnabout contest yourself! Then Hans might show up at _your_ door to turn you into a rubber drone and take over your contest... 😉
3/19/22, 10:31 AM
This story was written by someone with an incredible sense of humour that comes through loud and clearly. It is a joy to read when the author is this skillful, regardless of the content within. I don't want to rate this story on any axis except writing as it wouldn't be fair to you, but know that you deserve more than a 5, easily. Once again, bravo, bravo.

3/20/22, 7:31 PM
@A Possession A Day This is _such_ a kind comment, my gosh! Thank you!! I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed this story — I had a lot of fun writing it!