Recent Comments

3/16/22, 12:38 AM
Another incredible chapter! Ordinarily I skip sex scenes, but you write them so well that I couldn't resist reading them all. I have a suspicion that the mysterious umbrella-carrying man is the original owner of the briefcase keeping an eye on his prey... ;p My favorite has been the gold and silver! Shiny metallic sounds interesting. :)

3/16/22, 3:23 PM
@Feed Your Head shiny thongs are my favorite. As for the other thing... spoilers ;)
3/15/22, 3:52 AM
What a great story! It has taken a dark turn at the moment, but I appreciate your skilled world-building throughout the series and the resolution to the mystery in this chapter. If Brett and Liam get back together, they may be happier on more equal status with them both being breeders. I have enjoyed the journey you have taken us on thus far and look forward to where you take us next.

3/16/22, 1:39 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thanks glad you are enjoying the story.
3/16/22, 9:45 AM
It's kinda been said ad nauseum in the comments already but I was not emotionally ready for this chapter! After spending so long with the characters and getting to know them it feels kinda painful to see them suffer like this. If jonas gives Brett his voice and tits and Liam gets cunted I feel like I'm gonna go full Annie Wilkes lol - jokes aside I do trust and respect your vision, and will be awaiting the next installments - though I'm almost scared to read on

3/16/22, 12:39 PM
@silverstat LOL ;- ) SLIPPED AWAY! SLIPPED AWAY? HIS DICK DIDN'T JUST SLIP AWAY! YOU DID IT! YOU DID IT! YOU DID IT! YOU DID IT TO MY LIAM!
3/15/22, 11:31 AM
woah that is so hot. love love love stinky feet. and the mind control is insanely hot too!!

Rubber_Lover14
3/15/22, 1:08 PM
@James Heller Thank you very much. as you can probably tell, i love smelly feet too. I'm glad you enjoyed the story

3/16/22, 8:49 AM
@Rubber_Lover14 well I thank you for it. Stinky feet are the happiness in life, and you brought a lot of happiness into my life
3/16/22, 7:09 AM
AARRRRRGGGGG!!!!!! That Little Dickless Prick! I'm having trouble sleeping I'm so perfectly pissed! He simply can't get away with this. There must be some special level of Albion hell for such as It! Everyone eventually finds their orgasmic bliss in one form or another but he must not be rewarded with such. A third state of being there must be, specially designed for one who would endanger the entire race for this evil end, AND for the whole Cadre of collaborators regardless! The Unsatisfiables, forever agonized with unrequited Need! Good Night maybe....
Martin
3/13/22, 4:31 PM
I was looking forward to read this tonight... But now, after reading these comments, I'm afraid. If there's one thing I cannot take, then it's injustice and even worse, if the bad guys frame the innocent protagonist and get away with it. And from what I get from the comments, this seems to be exactly what's happening. Otoh, I know that this story is worth to endure some pain on my side. So I will stomach it. Please please make your best to mend our wounds with the later parts!

Pb
3/16/22, 6:36 AM
@Martin I'll have to admit that this series is giving me depression. D:
3/16/22, 4:10 AM
Love what you do with all the character work here. Especially Jason who has to play the older "brother" who def knows Tim has a bit of a crush on him. Really shows how much they care for each other in different ways, even Batman. They're all trying so hard and it makes their disagreements so much more real.
3/16/22, 3:27 AM
That was the hottest one yet! Please continue
3/16/22, 3:15 AM
This was an intersting story. Enjoyed it very much.
3/15/22, 10:12 PM
You're writing Tim in Red Robin search and destroy mode, and I fucking LOVE it. The sex is *so* hot, and the characterization of Tim is solid. I have niggles about Clark being a homophobe, I don't buy it in comics, but for all intents and purposes, I'll go where your story takes us so who cares, tbh. I can't wait to see the next chapter(s).

3/15/22, 10:46 PM
@Some Guy See I don't see Clark as homophopic, I see him as a straight white male from the midwest it makes him uneasy and he doesn't know why. Also he was only talking in regards to the Superman symbol being connected to an alternative lifestyle, not the lifestyle itself. All things Lois would have beat out of him before Jon was born :)

3/16/22, 2:00 AM
@Jack Parker Don't get me wrong, I was a little surprised, but I assume you have plans to get Clark positively wrecked so I don't think it really matters in the big picture. I'm positive you'll do some great smut through this series

3/16/22, 2:23 AM
@Some Guy also remember this is the same Superman who got attacked by the gang of thugs and was almost raped using rags of Donnie's sweat...he already has some issues about homosexuality lol