Recent Comments

boi98229
2/27/22, 4:36 AM
Wow! Hot! i am already in love with this premise and all of the characters. The induction and initial training seemed a little too easy, but then i didn't just finish a 9-hour flight, have a big meal (drugged?), wear a motivating belt buckle, or stare at a wavering candle flame. I strongly suspect that Matthew was already being very subtly trained via the video chats he had been having with Dr. Brown. He did seem to take a very quick liking to those belt buckles! And what about that orange juice?! Sorry, no time for comments now. I have to read on!
2/27/22, 3:44 AM
Please continue!
2/27/22, 3:43 AM
Just caught this one! Hot. Add more. This could go a long way.
2/27/22, 3:00 AM
great work for a first story :) looking forward to more of your writing hope the coach joins in as another muscle bitch
Saccnt2
2/27/22, 2:04 AM
This is a really good story!
2/17/22, 1:30 AM
I really love this one. Hope there is a sequel sometime.

2/26/22, 11:31 PM
@Drake Nightstorm The part about Justin is super hot. I have gone back to that bit a few times now.
Anonymous
2/26/22, 10:49 PM
Hope there's more...soon. I really need more...
2/26/22, 9:10 PM
This is so hot. Can you incorporate more tiddy play and nip torture for the next chapter?
2/26/22, 4:46 PM
This is definitely in my top list now. For some reason, when I first read the original version of this, I didn't love it the way I do now. Thank you so much for the changes you made to this, now. Can't wait for more!!

SC Walker
2/26/22, 8:18 PM
@revenge88fics I'm so glad you appreciate the changes. I've worked really hard to improve as a writer, particularly in characterization. I feel like Luke is more three-dimensional now than just a caricature.
2/26/22, 7:44 PM
I missed this when it came out a year ago. Really enjoyed it. The illustrations too.