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Apr 22, 2019
2/25/22, 10:14 PM
How did I miss this story? Thanks for posting it. My gooey cock thanks you too.
8/19/20, 12:37 AM
You know very little about the history of the WW2 and the history of science :(

2/25/22, 7:46 PM
I wasnt writing a history book @Tsakaur
1/7/21, 6:00 PM
Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery. A fresh take on the old classic, but you could have "fleshed" this out a little. The story moves way too quickly.

2/25/22, 7:43 PM
thanks where are you from? @Body Odor
2/25/22, 6:19 PM
If anyone didn't know what the old Space Jam site looked like, it's still preserved online. https://www.spacejam.com/1996/

2/25/22, 6:31 PM
Oh wow @Pwrliftermscl – I hadn't realized they'd kept an archive online! I just remembered it from a few years ago before the new movie came out. It was one of the most famously never-updated sites on the internet. Thanks for sharing.
Anonymous
2/25/22, 3:58 PM
great work thanks!!!

2/25/22, 6:29 PM
Thank you! I'm pretty sure this one is a 'love it or hate it' story, so I'm glad you enjoyed!
2/25/22, 3:57 PM
Hot damn! This was fantastic. I loved the descriptions of the Pink World--the perfect blend of surreal paradise and gay fantasia. Phenomenal stuff!

2/25/22, 6:29 PM
Thanks so much @Feed Your Head! My favourite thing about this story is how you think it's going to be a standard 'roommate turns gay' story, and then it swerves off into a fever dream. Whichever part of my mind this came from, I wasn't aware of it until the words were on the page. There's a tiny part of me that hopes the Pink World is real and I'm just getting a glimpse of it.
2/25/22, 8:41 AM
A very creative story! I loved the imagery.

2/25/22, 6:26 PM
Thanks @Norismo! I have no idea where any of it came from, but I've been doing some clowning lately and I think that's working it's way through my subconscious.
Anonymous
2/25/22, 5:28 PM
Hopefully chapter 10 soon!
2/25/22, 3:43 PM
nice. Loved it.
Martin
2/22/22, 9:44 PM
This is a wonderful, totally depraved, and crazy universe you've created. It's interesting how well received it is, even though so many gay guys keep repeating how they despise cunts (vaginas). But the way you describe how boys are turned into breeders is extremely arousing. I could live without their high pitch voices though. I wonder, are they as high as "our" women's voices or just high pitched compared to most men? The inner conflict the soon-to-be breeders are experiencing is quite interesting. But the one thing that makes me shudder a bit is the sexism that is absolutely apparent in every sentence. The way the bulls are basically toxic males is ruining this a bit for me. I think this would have worked just as well if the breeders and bulls were eye-to-eye and would fully respect each other the way they are. The story wouldn't be any less hot and interesting that way.

2/23/22, 2:09 AM
@Martin Gotta disagree on the sexism/respect thing. I can't say I appreciate toxic masculinity in real life, but as a wannabe slave, it trips my fantasy trigger. There's a story on the Eunuch Archive that does pretty much what you describe ("Malepussy World"), and compared to this one, I just find it meh.

2/25/22, 9:29 AM
@Martin Thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated. I agree with you on the toxic masculinity. It is almost supposed to be a little troubling. It is part of the arc for the characters. It isn't going to work for everyone. As for your choice of the word sexism! Consider this there is only one sex in this world. There is no female reference point for any of the characters! So it is definitely an "ism" of some sort but is it sexism? I like to think all the characters see themselves as men. None of the characters use female pronouns. The story for me at least is more about emasculation rather than feminization. Still great considered feedback thanks.

Martin
2/25/22, 10:17 AM
@Speedychopslover I used sexism for a lack of a better word. You didn't give us the proper term for the separation of the two states... 'Breederism' doesn't do it justice, because we don't say 'femalism' in our world either. I'm more than curious about where this is going to. Do you have the further chapters written already or are you still working on them?

2/25/22, 10:38 AM
@Martin. Lol. I am not going to give a term either. Although I do like "Breederism". It is all written and is in 7 parts. I am working with a really great writer and contributor to this site (lloydirving) to do the a final edit on each part. We are going over each part one per week. To just polish it off.

Martin
2/25/22, 10:48 AM
@Speedychopslover 👍