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1/8/22, 10:34 PM
That was smoking hot!

1/9/22, 6:18 AM
@stimle thanks bud!
1/9/22, 4:02 AM
This was really hot (very unsurprisingly), but what was surprising was that the ending was just a lot less dark than I anticipated. A sexy story with loads of menace and a sort of wholesome ending.
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1/9/22, 3:14 AM
Cant wait for next chapter!
1/9/22, 2:00 AM
Unf. This was such a hot story.
1/9/22, 1:01 AM
Oh, wow. This is *hot*!
1/8/22, 11:10 PM
Just came to this for like the sixth time. Fantastic story! Workouts, gym, muscle admiration/worshipfulness, pits, sweat, straight to gay... That's a lot of my biggest buttons in there! Thank you. Unlike a few commenters, and despite how much I love this, I'm perfectly happy without another chapter. It ended right where it should have, masterfully.
1/8/22, 10:42 PM
Also not a fan of Nikes, but I definitely appreciate a sweaty sneaker! It's great to see a story like this that combines the two kinks. I always appreciate a gradual transformation, and a story that lets us follow the subject's reactions and thoughts as it happens. Thanks for the story, it got me off twice so far!
1/8/22, 10:08 PM
Your characterization of Brandon in this story is so excellent and the care and attention you gave to it really pays off! I also love the quietly sinister power of the Code Breaker -- knowing what total control they had and how they demonstrated it was intimidatingly erotic. Excellent story!
1/8/22, 8:34 PM
Interesting beggining, but very hot premise (the Normal/sub societal dynamic). Also… not to be a party pooper, but I have some issues with "clean" being used in a casual way to refer to not having an STI. I'm okay with it in a degrading/humiliating setting, but I don't think this was the case. Used casually, I think it just reinforces serophobia. Anyway, it's just my humble one cent in that subject :)

1/8/22, 9:17 PM
@topdog Thank you for your comment and for pointing that out about the stigma and issues surrounding serophobia. It didn't cross my mind, but I can absolutely see it now, I agree 100% as it being an offensive off-hand comment. I have edited it now to remove that line. Thanks again, I appreciate this; it's always good to educate more about these things. :)
Jan 7, 2022
1/8/22, 8:53 PM
@Hypnothrill you say that you only write nefarious stories. But there is a way around that regarding Tabula Rasa. While I said the organization has only the best intentions, that doesn't mean that the simulation is as well. Think of it this way, the business is designed to make its clients happy and content. If will satisfy you innermost desires. So you can create simulations that cater to the specific desires of each men. What if a client wants a really pervy, mind fuck of a scenario. Maybe you can have twist built upon twists that make it hard for the client (and the reader) to know exactly what's going on. A client can experience a truly sinister simulation, and upon disconnecting from it, has no idea what he just went through. You emerge as a blank slate, feeling a full euphoria and ultimately fulfilled. It's as if waking from the best dream, but not really knowing why you feel so great. As far as Tabula Rasa goes, their main goal is to make money. To make money, they need clients. And to get clients, they have created a niche market, with virtually no competitors. So it's quite easy for them. Satisfy the client by giving them exactly what they want (which is happiness), and the money will flow.