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12/24/21, 1:14 PM
this is hot, as it always is with these two, but what's up with that chastity couple?

12/24/21, 5:26 PM
@Zi19 thank you so much!! i was editing this for so long bc i couldn't decide if i should take out those side-stories since they aren't fleshed out here. the couple who got huge cocks and the couple in chastity are/were little side TFs that I've sketched out but unsure if it'll make it into a published story. to "spoil" the chastity couple's story a bit -- one of them is a top, and this is his first time in a cage. he's trying it out to see what it's like for his boyfriend, who is locked pretty much constantly. his bf is a dedicated bottom and hates using his dick, and he's the one that approached razz and asked nicely for some magic. turns out he's dysmorphic about having a package, and would prefer to be nullo. razz uses derek's milk to make those dreams a reality. there are more details i have in mind, so hopefully i'll get around to writing a follow up for some of these loose threads
12/24/21, 1:50 PM
What can I say Derek? All of the guys above have already done that. It's been amazing to see the writers journey you've been on over the years with your stories, ideas and how you develop your characters. One of your experimental stories actually gave me the idea I am using for my Masters in Creative writing. Please continue, you are an inspiration for some of us. Your playing with various genres is always great to see too. Also, you have a talent for managing a viewers expectations and then surpassing them Now the compliment is done. That was also a damn hot story. Thanks. TC

12/24/21, 4:47 PM
Whoa @Tattcub! You can’t just drop that about your Masters and not tell me more! Which story? What’s the idea?
Henry Cavanaugh
12/24/21, 4:40 PM
Thank you for writing me a story as part of the exchange! Have a good Christmas.
12/24/21, 4:22 PM
Loved these snippets! I'm always a fan of a cow-man, but damn that cum dump change was hot too
12/24/21, 3:19 PM
To me, this was your most approachable story. The themes are universal, like any good fable, and it doesn't have the layer of oddness that you normally have in your transformation stories that I feel like I need to penetrate in order to appreciate the story (so all I'm saying here is that this story requires less effort on the part of the reader to appreciate, I don't think that's necessarily a good or a bad thing). I like how you structured this story, time wise. The parts of it that are very personal to you resonated most strongly. I didn't think the story was sad overall, more like bittersweet. I understand why you ended the story how you did, and didn't put Vesa and Nash together even though you obviously could have gone that route. It just wasn't the point you were making, so that's not sad to me. Definitely reminds me of Spider's approach to storytelling, and I'm happy to see you branch out and try a different mode of storytelling from your usual. Hope you have a great Christmas, bro.

12/24/21, 3:54 PM
@amul Thank you for your comment. I agree with you that I think of it more as a bittersweet story, but people's mileage may vary, so I decided to keep the "disclaimer". You are also correct in your observation that getting Nash and Vesa together at the end would have been anathema to their overall character arcs. Nash and Vesa were supposed to grow emotionally from their experience with Florian, not have it handed to them on a silver platter. Have a nice christmas as well. :)
12/24/21, 3:46 PM
This was super cool. Nice stories here.
12/24/21, 2:22 PM
I really liked this story a lot. The way their lycanthropy effected their minds as they changed, the various scenarios that led to the werewolves getting infected and changing, really everything was very good. I think I would have enjoyed knowing a bit more about what Sam and Dan look like now that they have changed (their lupine pelts and such). I realize you have detailed these things but A fuller review might be nice. I should stress I love the detail work, the way the different guys dont change the same way and their mental shifts. Really nicely done work. I like that their solution to escape is to become werewolves as well as how they got stuck in that situation. I hope we get to know more about that officer who ran off changing and see what they are up to. So far some interesting ideas, a neat set up, and I look forward to more.
12/24/21, 10:16 AM
Very nice story. I liked the bondage part. I especially loved the ending where all of them "live happily ever after"

12/24/21, 2:00 PM
@Nephilim Thanks, Nephilium. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Francesco
12/24/21, 1:59 PM
this is my favorite story of the site, I would like to see more with the same concept of "man of the house" where everything is due, even the most surreal situations become normal, beautiful.
Anonymous
12/24/21, 1:45 PM
please continue this