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12/15/21, 1:01 AM
I love a slow burn ...

12/15/21, 2:22 AM
Me, too. I guess I'm a little disappointed there isn't any actual hypnosis, since it's tagged - but maybe it doesn't have to be verbal to count. This is hot, regardless! A slow, gradual seduction without any mind tricks might even be hotter in some ways. I think you mean Bluto, not Brutus. It's been a while for me, too. I like the image. 🙂 Edit: just read the comments on the first chapter, lol. I guess I'm that guy... but I'm not really complaining!

12/15/21, 2:29 AM
@meatheadosis Keep in mind, it *is* a slow burn. There may very well be hypnosis coming in a later chapter.

12/15/21, 3:55 AM
@amul At this point, I'm fine with it either way. I love seduction stories! I don't know if I've ever even seen one in real life that went from a "no" to an enthusiastic "yes" (seen guys get less picky as it gets later/drunker, but that's *not* what I mean by a seduction).

12/15/21, 8:07 PM
@meatheadosis there was a Bluto, and a Brutus in the Popeye cartoons. Glad you're enjoying the story. Next time I'll have giant space lasers hypnotize him in the first chapter :)
12/15/21, 7:56 PM
It's definitely becoming steamy. This is so casual and yet so hot.
12/15/21, 6:07 PM
The sex is really well done and very hot. What essentially amounts to a triple homicide makes the story a bit too dark though IMO. Its definitely an interesting take on "vampires".
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12/15/21, 11:49 AM
You gotta be kidding me!!! My favorite story now haves a sequel! I love every single part of it! Good job!
12/15/21, 10:16 AM
great 1st chapter. I would love it if the muscle growth and exhibitionism was contagious and the brother and Dad ended up going the same way
12/13/21, 9:50 AM
Pretty dark ending! You did the tags justice! Secret Santa has generated some great story ideas.
12/15/21, 7:54 AM
Finding an old Piercedskin story is like finding money in a pair of trashed pants you haven't worn in years.
12/15/21, 7:43 AM
I would really like to see the rugby team who knocked him up become father's to the boy growing inside the daddy. And as Dace suggested maybe the little boy needs a brother.
12/15/21, 7:30 AM
I love a good slow-burn story and this is a great one!