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2_Zealots
12/8/21, 4:24 AM
This is like my new favorite series please continue it, finally a genie story where the genie is more active!
12/8/21, 12:35 AM
Downright heartwarming. What a sweet little romp with a super likeable (and, ADHD here, relatable) POV character. The way you narrate their sex was super hot too, really visceral and easy to follow. Thanks for another great chapter!

12/8/21, 2:59 AM
@tenser13 I'm so glad you enjoyed! Writing Emrys was *really* fun but I had to be careful to keep the narrative thread going while his mind wandered all over the place. I'm excited to come back to this series soon!
Jun 6, 2016
12/8/21, 2:51 AM
Moves fast. Deserves a follow up story.
12/7/21, 9:53 PM
I honestly don't think I've shipped a couple on this site as much as I do Gray and Archie. You've built their relationship and character really well that when time stopped, it's an instant smile for me. Also I love how much a few days of being in love with Gray had built Archie's self confidence in a good way. He went from questioning all his past actions to confidently saying that he's a more expensive slut than Dax. Love to see that lol.

12/7/21, 11:05 PM
@Zi19 can not agree more. I generally don't become invested in the over all relationships of the characters when reading on this site but I have to say I'm glued to my seat watching archie & gray grow into a power couple. Very talented writer.

Martin
12/7/21, 11:16 PM
@Zi19 I haven't read this series, yet, but after these comments, I plan to do it asap. I just wonder why it's not cross posted to GayCupid, if the relationship is that important in the series! Jack, do you want to change that perhaps?

12/7/21, 11:18 PM
@Martin Given some of the comments I've gotten posting it here I do not. There is a love story here but I am not willing to hear people complain about it for ten chapters for it to come back around. But I am glad you guys are liking it.
12/5/21, 11:07 AM
as a fellow slutty non-binary person with an incest and foot/sock/shoe fetish i identify so heavily with tom I wonder if they were also given the app beforehand and thats why theyre so slutty

12/5/21, 6:00 PM
@Dapper aw thank you so much! I'm really glad you like them, I'm quickly finding that Tom is just an utter joy to write. I hope you approve of how I write about them? Oooh interesting theory! There is definitely a lot more to Tom that we're yet to lean about. You'll be very excited to know that the next chapter is going to be rather Tom-centric ;)

12/5/21, 8:08 PM
@FKH19 my theory is they were either given the app pr or sre the creator. I love the way you wrote tom, they're my personal fantasy hehe,very excited now for chapter 2

12/5/21, 9:05 PM
@Dapper hmm both interesting theories. Guess we'll have to wait and see ;) and yay hehe thank you, I'm glad the way I wrote a non-binary person is approved by an actual non-binary person. Representation, but make it sexy :)

12/5/21, 11:09 PM
sexy representation is the best kind of representation! @FKH19

12/7/21, 4:36 AM
@FKH19 also good on you to be a trailblazer and be the first non binary tagged story

12/7/21, 9:11 PM
@Dapper thank you! yes it was only after i published the story i realised there was no nb tag, so i thought i would start one and be the first. i look forward to seeing it grow and grow with more stories :)
12/7/21, 9:01 PM
I love stories that stink!
12/7/21, 8:49 PM
I like the way you attack your subject. You have talent. I can't wait to see your next piece of writing. And your pic is freaking hot. Put yourself and your shop in the next story.
12/7/21, 5:43 PM
After what happens with the last chapter it is really make me happy to see archie got to know what to do with his self again
12/7/21, 5:27 PM
Toad and his family need to be punished.

Dylan
12/7/21, 5:42 PM
@Cutlerfan ;-)
12/7/21, 5:01 PM
Bless my little gay heart, I loved when time stopped!