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11/19/21, 11:13 AM
All round fantasy mind fuck in reading this story. One can believe the medical condition and growing love. I can imagine the perfection if this senior wrestler and see the awe from the kid on this body perfection towering above him. I'm hoping Archy finds himself wearing his new boyfriend's used jockstrap.
11/19/21, 9:11 AM
Amazing hot story - the best!,
Dylan
11/19/21, 8:38 AM
Thank you Sir, as a message from the site owner is a true honor! I am new to this site , so i really appreciate any feedback to improve my writing skills. Any suggestions to the plot would be welcome as well, i gladly try to fullfil anyones wishes, as far as i can ! Greets, Dylan
Anonymous
11/19/21, 6:06 AM
Blacks Beach doesn't have any life guards lol
11/19/21, 4:56 AM
Amazingly well written. One of the very best pieces I've read on here. I agree. Very hot and romantic. Would love to read more. I could see these two four years in the future morphed into a blissful couple. Archie national champ coming home to support his boyfriend Grayson whose now top alpha senior wrestler.
11/19/21, 4:43 AM
Go on!
11/19/21, 4:09 AM
I also wish it went on.
Aaron
11/18/21, 4:12 PM
I found this story to be good at parts but other times it fell short. Many of the things said were not commands they were suggestions or musings like "And i know you want to" there is nothing to stop Mark from leaving the house, jumping on a plane and hiding out for a week. Knowing what is now in store for him there is 0 reason he wouldn't take that opportunity seeing as he is clearly super rich. Some of the sex content was great while other parts were brief and it honestly would have been better if those ones were left out. Its not a bad story it just seems like it was written with your dick in one hand not planning it out before hand. I'll be interested to see where the next chapter goes

11/19/21, 3:57 AM
@Aaron Mark was in fact ordered to wait for Terry to bring his next master to him. Going with what the stated effects of the drug are in the story, he would be forced to comply with that for at least a week - and Terry promised to return within 5 days.
Martin
11/19/21, 3:07 AM
This series has become a bit of a guilty pleasure for me. Revolting and very hot at the same time. Thank god it's only a fantasy, and a hot one at that!
11/17/21, 9:19 PM
Another hot story Martin. I hope you have plans to continue.

Martin
11/18/21, 6:31 AM
@Beaner I have a half-finished chapter for that series for a long time. Unfortunately, this series never saw too many readers, so I was a bit disappointed and never got around to finish that chapter. I had some great plans for the series, but if people aren't interested, my drive to write is suffering. Especially since on my normal day to day life, I struggle finding enough spare time to spend on writing. Right now I'm on vacation, which is really helping a lot :) But I'm really glad that you like that series! Thank you!

11/18/21, 7:42 PM
@Martin Well I only just found it, so maybe February was a bad time of year. I hope I can inspire you to return to it - but first enjoy your vacation. Someplace warm I hope!

Martin
11/19/21, 2:51 AM
@Beaner Thanks. We're in Thailand, it's warm all right, but it's raining way more than usual for this time of year. Not complaining though, we're having a great time, and I finally get the chance to write a bit :)