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Sep 28, 2021
10/8/21, 5:17 PM
Very well done. I think i prefer the low-stakes framing of this kind of extreme transformation compared to stories where things like this happen to a character and alter them permanently.

11/8/21, 11:02 PM
Thanks! Some of the more extreme stuff is hot in the moment to me, but then I think about the ramifications and I feel bad. @amul
Anonymous
11/8/21, 2:31 AM
Great start! Hope that there will be more!

11/8/21, 10:31 PM
There will ! ; )

Anonymous
11/8/21, 10:48 PM
@Elgæ75 that's awesome!
11/8/21, 9:47 PM
I'm so loving this story, it's my favorite.

11/8/21, 10:43 PM
@Jonanator Thank you. It's great to hear you're enjoying it!
11/8/21, 10:41 PM
I agree with Plymouth58, the story taken as a whole is really well done and plotted out. The slow descent and all that. It really is nicely done. However, there were aspects to it that I really balked at, but I'm sure the less squeamish folks will really appreciate this story if they take the time to read it, it's quite long!
11/8/21, 10:16 PM
Want to see how Martin turns out

11/8/21, 10:33 PM
@MalSkin There will be some interesting transformationS ! ; ) What would you like to see ?
11/8/21, 9:55 PM
Love the story so far. I wonder who Issac ends up with?

11/8/21, 10:11 PM
Good question! More coming soon. I’m glad you’re enjoying it! @Jonanator
11/8/21, 9:38 PM
This was such a great story on every level. Would love a continuation.
11/8/21, 9:26 PM
Can't wait for more
11/8/21, 9:14 PM
This looks like it is gonna be so hot.
11/8/21, 9:05 PM
Nice start, sexy potential. I like the way he called the cop "good boy" and I hope said guy comes to find pleasure in that. While I am not so much for humiliation them keeping it to the house was nice. I hope that our main guy doesn't ruin him publically, especially as I think there is a lot more potential in having a cop under his control then having a former cop. My final thought, and sort of obligatory request, is please have some buttplay and rimming. :) But yeah, nice start. Oh, as a note, the whole "he just drank" perfectly set up the whole hypnosis being a bit easier than it otherwise would be. So kudos on that.