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11/23/25, 12:04 PM
Incredible work!

11/23/25, 12:18 PM
@[Dace](/user/show/1217645) Thank you! I’m actually in the process of writing a follow up, so I hope you read and enjoy that one too when it gets posted.
Anonymous
11/23/25, 7:33 AM
This was amazing!

11/23/25, 11:23 AM
@Anonymous I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!
Nov 23, 2025
11/23/25, 8:49 AM
Very cool idea. Interested to see where this goes.
Nov 23, 2025
11/23/25, 4:49 AM
Interesting idea! Very unique, I'm looking forward to more.
11/23/25, 3:50 AM
🔥🔥🔥
11/23/25, 2:51 AM
Yessss - every since you expanded Kevin’s role in earlier chapters, I’ve been waiting for Brody to take his virginity. And you did it in the best way, too! Thanks, man!
11/23/25, 2:16 AM
All of these chapters are awesome but Parker and Andy remind me of the couple in my very favorite chapter, Sam and Jason. I love how brilliantly you write incredibly hot, sexy scenes but then also turn around and make them wholesome, sweet and kind hearted. Parker's reaction to seeing Andy broken really touched and surprised me. Thanks for making these characters feel real and three dimensional. I can't wait for the next chapter!
11/22/25, 11:37 PM
Wow, this is really hot! Your writing always nails the perfect balance of corruption and guilt that comes with dad-son incest. Looking forward to see this pair again!
11/22/25, 10:09 PM
Okay this chapter is half hot half wholesome. A supportive bicouple. Andy and Parker having a wholesome relationship instead of mindfucked relationship. What a packed chapter. Cant wait to see whats coming next (week, perhaps)
11/17/25, 10:57 PM
Hot story, but it's tough to root for rapists. I hope Drew and Travis get revenge.

11/21/25, 3:06 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I agree with you)

11/21/25, 4:18 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) chapter 3 will be also dark but only spoiler I can give is chapter 4 will be named " rise and fall of the idiots " which will be about ramirez's and o'malley's back story , their games and where they end up and how they end up there . for the studio I am planing to take them down eventually but I think this story will be 10 chapters so before the dawn there will be some more darkness . new marines , new events , threats , obedience , defiance and sun rise .

11/22/25, 9:44 PM
@[Hypnoboy-7](/user/show/10055892) Thanks for shedding light on where this story is going! I look forward to seeing how it unfolds.