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10/17/21, 1:26 PM
I'm honestly not sure why this is labeled a horror story. Everything seems to be going quite ideally so far. Maybe there's a surprise twist that ruins things later?

chiboxerboi:
10/18/21, 2:42 AM
@goodbiforever It is meant to be a mind control spoof of the television program "American Horror Story." Sarah Paulson will appear in a later chapter wearing a fat suit, facial hair and fake teeth as the character of Drill Sargeant Adams. I kid. She turned me down.
JMan
10/18/21, 1:57 AM
Great first chapter! I really like the writing and the energy. And very curious about where this is going....
10/18/21, 1:22 AM
WEREWOLF!!!!
10/18/21, 1:05 AM
I remember reading this story before but either I didn't rate it and didn't comment - or I read it on a different site. In any case, I enjoyed this story and thought it was super hot, even the brutal ending which is unusual for me. I normally recoil at some of the more permanent and disabling transformations. I thought it was nicely sinister that we never found out who ordered this to be done to Gus or even who bought him. Gus was ultimately just a product to be moved at the end by his trainers.
Evan
10/18/21, 12:28 AM
Really cool idea and quite a mystery. Great writing, I will be keeping a look out for new chapters.
10/18/21, 12:21 AM
I love that the pack is actually trying to fix Skippy/Christian. What could have been a short kinky homophobe/revenge story became something with a lot more depth and commentary about how society produces our own villains.
10/17/21, 11:40 PM
Big fan! of this story! I always felt like fantasy stories were under represented on this site. lad to see it being explored!
9/20/21, 12:54 AM
One thing I did not feel was communicated effectively by the story is why people would undergo this voluntary transformation.

10/17/21, 10:46 PM
@amul Haha, I am not sure how to answer this. It's a kink TF story. I think if I were to approach the willingness to undergo TFs realistically, I would severely cut down the number of stories I could tell. The setting operates under the premise that TFs are more popular than they are in the real world.
Anonymous
10/17/21, 1:43 PM
Very interesting. Not very kinky as far as I'm concerned, but it was a fun read. Good job. :)

10/17/21, 1:45 PM
@Thank you, mysterious stranger.

10/17/21, 10:44 PM
@Norismo Haha, that was me, sorry, I didn't realize I wasn't logged in.
10/17/21, 10:39 PM
Very nice. Thank you.