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4/3/25, 1:47 AM
Well...this got hot. I'm only halfway through and wow. I'm glad you didn't give up...How long will we wait for Part 3?

4/3/25, 3:39 AM
@[hypnopaladin](/user/show/10058683) Well. At least a few weeks. I have to rework part 3 a little. And I want to fix the hollow king series as well and get the AI assist off of it. I can’t stand seeing it. So I’ve got to go back to work on it as well.
4/3/25, 3:27 AM
Stay with Brad. I love our Bull
4/3/25, 2:26 AM
when will you upload more chapters to this and performance management?🥺 i always come back to this story because it’s SO good
Poggie
4/3/25, 2:02 AM
I'm really excited to see what comes next! It's best AWESOME so far!
Anonymous
4/3/25, 12:37 AM
Good story! Definitely gave me a reaction!
4/2/25, 11:39 PM
Don't know if you plan to do more of these but they're so hot! Would love more!
4/2/25, 11:32 PM
Things get a little more hot this time. I had to split this part into two. It was 124 pages. And went I did the last draft this part went from 68 to like 87. Oops! Please take the time to read and let me know! Rock and Jax are going to get into a lot of shit with T’ai and Zyvaris while Malakar attempts to get Rock’s mind. And his pants
4/2/25, 11:03 PM
Love the series so far! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Anonymous
4/2/25, 11:00 PM
Hot.
4/2/25, 7:41 PM
I have a feeling that I have read this story before. Have you ever post this anywhere else? I seems familiar.

4/2/25, 8:42 PM
@[Yongyuthx](/user/show/72133) This story seems based off of "Domination of a Quarterback" by Jonathan Longhorn

4/2/25, 9:39 PM
@[Larry](/user/show/494946) That's why it seems familiar. I've read that story. I hope this is not just the AI paraphrase with the change of character 😭