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10/14/21, 12:04 AM
I'm glad that this story is here and has prompted so much introspection. It's a fantasy, and fantasy doesn't have to be just about getting off. It can also be about exploring our own kinky thoughts and feelings and sometimes comparing them to reality and coming to some uncomfortable conclusions. Everything that people have mentioned regarding why this story upsets them is absolutely true and legitimate - and as Martin has pointed out - these same lines of thinking apply to all the more extreme non-consensual stories on this site. For me personally, the stories that involve eradicating the personality of the victim (whether in favor of a new, simplistic and sex-starved persona or a blank mindless drone) always feel like murder. I find them upsetting even though sometimes the lead-up is very arousing. As I said in the comments to a different story, forced age regression is automatically a dark subject. There is no way to sugarcoat it. It's purely a fantasy, and it should still probably disturb you even if you happen to find it hot. I'm still glad that this website allows this subject to be explored - and the characters in this story simply are *not children.* If the story *only* disturbs you because they are acting like children and you'd be 100% OK with it if they were turned into equally unable to consent retarded nymphomaniac twinks well - honestly maybe your issue isn't with consent and violation it's just that you have one kink and not the other.
10/13/21, 11:49 PM
I'm so happy for Greg. Excelling in his new life. Such a great story. Moowoof!
10/13/21, 8:13 PM
Love this story! I got a little bit lost trying to figure out the specifics of The Order through our unreliable mindfucked narrator, but overall the idea of a secret society of gay mages secretly running a competition on the mainland to recruit the strongest, most flexible men in the kingdom as their personal servants is extremely hot. Something I don't see very often on this server that especially turns me on is using MC abilities for both sexual gratification *and* political power; that scene where its revealed that the powerful duke sitting atop his throne is really just another sexual pawn of the monks was so amazing. Him getting interrupted by his "advisor" who takes the throne away like its nothing (plus the little detail that he was actually naked the whole time with just the illusion of armour) was incredible
10/13/21, 1:37 AM
Please tell me that you have king lycan in the labyrinth. I loved that Zeus made a werewolf and then just let to run around in the wild. so different most of the stories there the person is killed after being punished, or simply tossed into hades. that being said I would hope that he has turned over a new leaf if you are going to use him.

10/13/21, 7:29 PM
I'll have to brush up and the stories, but sounds like he'd be a perfect creature to be in the Labyrinth. Thanks for the read, glad you enjoyed. 😊 @DLOFT

10/13/21, 7:49 PM
@ArdanWolfe one of my ocs is a decendent of Lycan, as he had 60 sons and 1 daugther, so he having surviving decendents is possible
10/13/21, 7:43 PM
option 1. I love the cock shrinking/sph elements to the story. i hope Greg ends up with a tiny cock.
10/13/21, 10:34 AM
The ending of this story was so desolate and creepy. Really captured the Twilight Zone vibe. I was reminded of the ending to Terry Pratchet's *Small Gods*, where Death subverts Sartre; "YOU HAVE PERHAPS HEARD THE PHRASE, he said, THAT HELL IS OTHER PEOPLE?" ... "IN TIME YOU WILL LEARN THAT IT IS WRONG."

10/13/21, 7:38 PM
Thanks @amul! I changed the ending so many times, but I’m the end this was the best ironic twist I could find. Thanks for visiting The Rainbow Zone.
10/13/21, 5:24 AM
An interesting plot twist.

10/13/21, 5:29 AM
@Cutlerfan as long as you don't call me M. Night Ramalamadingdong, we're good. 😂

10/13/21, 6:25 PM
@Uncle Arctos No, I like a bit of a twist but nothing as extreme as M. Night's work.
10/13/21, 6:14 PM
I was indulging in a short self-edging session this morning, but this chapter made me cum hard unwillingly. So… Well done, dear writer.
Oct 11, 2021
Martin
10/12/21, 8:13 PM
I like that story! Very hot. I really wonder why nifty wouldn't publish it. Well, their loss!

10/13/21, 3:16 PM
Hey, @Martin! Thanks for the comment. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
Oct 11, 2021
10/11/21, 8:46 PM
I like this story. I am dreaming that I am this boy! Can't wait to read the next chapter on what happens at the boy fair. :)

10/13/21, 3:15 PM
@monkeyhimbo Don't we all wish we were him? Hehehe I don't really plan on writing a sequel, but I have a few other ideas I want to explore! Also, I forgot to add to the header of the story, people are free to adapt and republish it as long as they link to the original source and attribute the original authorship. Maybe you could think of a sequel too :)