@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thanks so much! I was worried about the multiple perspectives--this was my first major foray into multiple perspectives, and I'm glad it's working well. The Hunter arc is one of my favourites in this story, I hope it'll satisfy.

@[Reader](/user/show/780823) To me it seems like he was talking about Sam with whoever gave him the drugs and that sorta anchored him. Hey there big boy -> oh I'm not gay I'm just here with my BIL yadda yadda -> sounds like you should fuck your BIL -> he's great but I'm straight -> and then that's where all the everyone's fluid fuck who you want comes in. Lucky break.

@Rando Our sites explicitly allow raceplay as part of an erotic story. Not to endorse racism in any way, but because raceplay is an integral part of the kinky erotic culture. And as long as it's purely sexual and doesn't convey the message that all members of a given ethnicity are superior or inferior just because of their "race", those stories are fine to be posted here. It doesn't matter which "race" we're talking about. And the notion that white people are now the victims of racism, especially in the USA and other Western cultures, is a narrative that I personally find disgusting.

@[Corin](/user/show/125990) I'm happy to hear the "as long as it’s purely sexual and doesn’t convey the message that all members of a given ethnicity are superior or inferior just because of their “race”" statement. That's something I completely agree with. Nowhere in my message did I talk about the USA or other Western cultures, white people also live in eastern and southern cultures, be at as a minority group. Also, I personally find the notion that they can't be the victims of racism in those cultures disgusting. Especially if I see what is being posted about them on platforms like twitter/X and tumblr (which ironically come from the USA). They can experience racism just as anyone else can, and to deny someone a feeling is just rude in my eyes. Also adding a location restriction on it just feels weird to me. Stories were white people are mass transformed into people of different "races", where it as treated as if they were "upgraded", stories were a relation between a white man and a woman (where the man is seen as the problem) is up and a person of color ends up doing it with both, stories were all white men are mass enslaved to server men of color (slavery stories are always gross in my eyes), stories where they are called white-trash, bleach demons, milk crickets, q-tip people. And that's the tame stuff. I've also seen posts about destroying their cultures and killing white people, and you don't call that racism? I wouldn't like it when "my" people say this about others, but I also don't like it when it is said about "us". I've also seen those "maga" stories on Tumblr and I find those absolutely disgusting, as in my eyes they seem to be an insult to all people involved. Luckily, people are speaking up about those stories, although other problematic stories seem to fly under the radar. At the end of the day, I'm sick of being treated as I don't deserve to live or be happy, by people who don't even know me. I'm sick of getting accused of things I've never thought or said or where things I worked hard for are downplayed (which hurts extra as I feel like I have to put in extra effort to compensate for the problems my autism might cause others), while I haven't done that to anyone else. I also won't fall for the "but they didn't say anything about you specifically" excuse I often hear, if I meet your criteria then you mean me as well. In the past I would have remained silent, but after what I've seen and what happened to someone dear to me, I won't stay silent about this issue anymore.

@[Corin](/user/show/125990) I don't see any talk of racism anywhere in this story other than John's perspective. The story does not support racism; it merely portrays one main character person who does admittedly have a racist perspective about the character of white men he likes to dominate. I expect there are many many men of all races in the real world who still have racist thoughts and biases. So is Rando saying we shouldn't represent racism even as a perspective to be recognized? Personally I think we need to talk about racial prejudice a lot more in very real ways with the honest intent to minimize it in the real world. With respect to fantasy and fiction I see no problem with race having a part in establishing the values and perspectives of a character in a story, as long as the story itself doesn't propose racism as a real solution for anything. My other objection pertains to Rando's perspective on racism and BDSM in the story. It seems he has an objection with an Alpha of one race dominating a submissive of another race, but also admits to not being interested (or seemingly having much understanding of BDSM or power exchange). This is personal to me because i am white and a submissive bottom boy who finds a lot of Black Men to be physically extremely attractive. Unlike Rando i constantly search for exactly this type of D/s and M/s story (with or without race as a factor). In real life if a Black Man who is dominant and controlling (optionally with addictive pheromones ;) ) were to find me attractive and be looking for a white bottom boy, you think i should call him racist?!! i don't think so. i feel it would be much more fitting to the situation if i were to go to my knees, kiss his feet, and ask how i might serve. (I'm still searching for my own boundaries between fantasy and reality! ;) ) My only serious concern with this story is that it currently only has one chapter -- written a month ago! It seriously stimulated my addiction for good story-telling so i am admittedly a little cranky at this point -- all wired up with nowhere to go! But given that i have weak story-telling skills myself and a D/s reading addiction, my only real comments to the author are: Thanks so much, Sir. How may i serve you, Sir?

@Rando you are, and i say this with the utmost sincerity, phenomenally stupid.

@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I haven't read the story itself, so please excuse my ignorance of its actual contents. My answer to Rando was meant as a generic reply, as I didn't approve of his reverse-racism claims in his comments. I totally get your point, and it's the very reason I don't mind sexual raceplay on this site. I'm absolutely aware that this is a sexual fantasy for many people - especially from the submissive side. And that's the same is true for anyone who enjoys reading a story about mind-control from the pov of the controlled person. This is a kink I share personally, so I absolutely understand this desire. People who had no prior experience to these kinks might not understand that, though, and that's why we have to tell them, again and again. In a friendly, polite way.

@[Ragnarok](/user/show/14073) Thanks for the feedback. It's taking a bit longer than expected, but there will definitely be more of Trent in the future. He's ripe to be turned into a true fag.

@[RF Naughty](/user/show/10051968) Thanks for the response. I Love to hear it. I will be kind of maybe..patiently waiting for it to cum out. 😉

@Z Thank you very much for your sincere comment and encouragement. Additionally, This is the first comment written to me, so it means a lot to me. :partying_face: I realize this chapter is short and undetailed. Also, It has a prologue(ish) structure because I'm curious about readers' reactions and suggestions besides being my first story chapter. I will follow your advice in the next chapters and I hope you enjoy the upcoming ones even more. Hope to see you again in comments. :wave:

@[Don Spiralis](/user/show/10068157) Hi! Can you tell us when we can expect a sequel? :star_struck:

@[Zelles](/user/show/922116) Hi! The next chapter will most likely be released on Tuesday. :blush:

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