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9/7/21, 7:45 PM
I was thinking about WHY where the parents not arrested immediately, but okay, this is credible, except how rushed the trial is, but I don't think anyone will complain. Mark and Vincent ended up not meaning a lot , until now. I do enjoy the fact that Cole has separation anxiety. A slight issue I had with this franchise from the get-go was how little the characters seemed affected. This is a slight touche but it helps so much.

9/7/21, 8:37 PM
@BobbyBlobfish Thanks for the comment. it's very helpful.
9/7/21, 6:13 PM
Hot chapter. Hope more is to come.
9/7/21, 6:06 PM
I love this story. please tell me there is more in the works.
9/7/21, 2:04 PM
Thank you, guys. I think I tend to go to a more elusive description, either they got this point or even physical description of the characters. Perhaps I write a prequel about the stud's conditioning at the Camp…

Ysuran
9/7/21, 6:04 PM
that i would love to read @topdog
9/7/21, 4:36 PM
I want to see the brother
9/7/21, 3:31 PM
ahhhhh been so long i love it heeheeh looking forwarf how this goes on from here
8/8/21, 1:07 PM
It has been so long....... i hope the updates comes sooner........ i really need to know what happens next and so on...

8/17/21, 5:49 AM
@Hypnobot - sorry for the wait... I been working on trying to finish something for the new site and I haven't finish the next chapter... will soon... please be patient 🙏

9/7/21, 2:50 PM
@Hypnobot – good news, I finally publish next chapter :3
Ysuran
9/7/21, 1:13 PM
Really enjoying the series, good setup so far, it will be interesting to see how the story goes forward. I look forward to reading future chapters and I hope more are on the way soon.
9/7/21, 1:11 PM
I read this in the morning and it made me so horny that I couldn't focus on my works in office all day.
9/7/21, 11:42 AM
Okay, bobby, you can do this, second story! And I have the feeling the writing had a step down? hear instead of here, some i, "hos name", interest in e"... (May I recommend getting a beta reader, at least for now? When I had a lot of issues writing in English, that's what I did) The relationship is more solid this time around, on the other hand. The fact it comes out so fast despite both characters wanting to know each other is a bit weird, but it can be used in plenty of ways. I think the biggest problem here, I didn't comment on it in the last chapters of the emperor and I, is that Marc seems to have done a 180 in term of characterization. He went from apparently genuine friend to self-destructive asshole without much build up. I don't know, it feel like you changed plans about him as you were writing. A lot of people do that, subplots are definitively subject to changes. It just comes off really badly because now it went from side story to part of the overall plot.

9/7/21, 11:47 AM
@BobbyBlobfish Yeah, as I said, this story did not um, turn out good, which is why I kind ended it early. I'm going to circle back to it at a later time, and try to redo it, after I get a good thought process with it. A lot of things were happening at the time, that, this one just slipped away from me. I probably will be posting a new chapter for the new story I'm working on, so, there's hope with that one, hopefully. Thanks again for the comment. I'll use them to help me refix this one.