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Horny
8/28/21, 5:58 AM
oh i was kinda hoping for a happy ending for Lee, imo its never really fun when the tormentor gets away scott free with their acts. this was still a fun story though, thanks for your work!
Aug 26, 2021
EJG
8/28/21, 5:26 AM
Hot. Just fantasising he becomes the office slut
8/28/21, 4:23 AM
so fucking hot! cant wait to see what else he puts into the agenda!
8/28/21, 2:02 AM
I do hope Sam can accept that he likes doing "gay stuff" eventually.
8/28/21, 1:04 AM
I love the story, and I especially love the interactions between Gabe and Sam. I can definitely see that Sam and Marc are being pulled together with the edits made, but I hope that even if Sam eventually succumbs to Marc magic dick he doesn't lose his relationship with Gabe. No matter what happens, this is a fantastic story, and I'm super excited to see what changes and events you write in future chapters, keep up the awesome work!

8/28/21, 1:47 AM
Thanks! I try to avoid spoilers (although I'm probably bad at it...) but I will say that Sam and Gabe are still close friends at the end of the story! @Jacker
8/28/21, 12:12 AM
I wasn’t expecting another chapter so soon — great surprise! The tension between Marc and Sam is my favourite part of this whole deal, though Gabriel and Sam is a really fun dynamic too. I’m a little worried for Sam. At the rate this is going, I suspect bottoming might become a straight dude thing. And there aren’t that many straight guys left on campus! I’m seriously curious what’s up with the black suits. I sure hope nobody pranks them by replacing their bottled water with tap water.

8/28/21, 1:45 AM
It was originally one massive chapter, but I thought splitting it up and polishing both bits would be a smoother read! The black suits plot thread definitely starts moving faster in the next chapter. @Derek Williams
8/27/21, 11:49 PM
Rook was right. That was hot.
8/27/21, 10:46 PM
This series is just an absolute gift. So hot and funny and heartwarming. Thanks again for posting.

8/27/21, 11:04 PM
Thanks! And you're welcome! @tenser13
8/27/21, 9:52 PM
Fun!
8/25/21, 11:05 AM
Haha, my one complaint with the fic previously was that while I loved the consensual hypnosis since it's not something you really ever see, i wasn't really a fan of the way the narrative kinda went "actually nevermind, Cyrus is like every other manipulative hypno jerk and consent had nothing to do with all the fun changes" But then this happened! 10/10 absolutely love being made to eat my words lmao 👌💖

8/27/21, 9:30 PM
@Cumguts ohhh yeah I know what you mean. personally i prefer 100% consensual for pretty much everything, but I also like the shock of a transformation. it's a hard thing to balance, and when writing the original, it was getting too long and my goal was just to get it finished for the pandemic competition. i wasn't too happy with that ending, either, but i know some people were into it and might not like this "actually they're super romantic and in love and happy, jack was just shocked and needed context/memories to feel the same". to each their own! personally i like the happy ending more :P if i were to rewrite the whole thing, I don't think i'd have that "actually Cyrus is mean" twist at all, tbh. it made it a little convoluted to untangle in this part, hahaha.