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Jul 29, 2021
8/2/21, 1:09 PM
Transforming a junkie into a jock (and probably saving his life) is a nice change from transforming functional people into morons. Nice idea and keep writing!

8/21/21, 7:45 PM
@amul I agree! And it's a nice change of pace to have the protagonist unchanged or mind controlled through the story.
8/21/21, 7:34 PM
Gotta admit I was a bit reticent reading this at first since farts aren't my kind of thing, but the tags made me curious enough to look into it and now I want to read the continuation! Like others mentioned, try using a editor for the syntax before posting (usually there is one integrated to most text writing programs). Good job!
Mindwhisperer
8/21/21, 6:09 PM
I'm sorry, I require a story to have at least a minimal amount of believability. *"Local cycling rules - you gotta do what I say.” “Uh, OK, man…” Jake laughed uneasily, now regretting engaging with the other guy at all. This was getting kind of awkward. “Yeah, now I’m all boned up from that sprint. You’re gonna suck me off, dude.”* Really?
8/21/21, 5:32 PM
You should do more to this, it's hot.
8/21/21, 5:02 PM
You should do another part, I love this story.
Mindwhisperer
8/21/21, 4:58 PM
Another Cici pleaser!
8/21/21, 3:35 PM
This must be the best story on here, fantastic.
Anonymous
8/21/21, 2:24 PM
im dying for the next part
8/21/21, 2:06 PM
I love your work. But I'm not a fan of undoing the previous stipulations. I love how you focus on the humiliation of your characters and everything isn't only sex-focused. And this chapter took a lot of that away, in my opinion. Having the professor have a humiliating bout the of giggles in every day situations would have been so entertaining. A bit of a let down for me by this chapter, but still love your work. Just wanted to comment since there wasn't many of this story and wanted to give my feedback.
Anonymous
8/21/21, 1:30 PM
Been following the series for a while now. Never fails to get me going. Please don't take too long with the next installment. Haha