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8/19/21, 1:37 AM
so happy to have you back with now the football team. nice
8/19/21, 12:43 AM
I like this story; definitely like the timely approach and the concept. The whole vampires in the police force takes me back to the Original Being Human. My only criticism is the digs on the other supernaturals in the statement. I would think that the digs and tensions would be kept behind closed doors and out of sight of the humans (doesn't mean that everyone wouldn't know about them.) I would expect them to say publicly something like: "We stand with our lycan brothers and sisters, who also have been persecuted and hunted due to the savagery promoted by the Church. We lend our voice to speak for the zombie community, to vocalize what they cannot about the ill treatment at the hands of humankind. We also vocalize the concerns of the ghostly community, who are ignored and trivialized by humanity." He should portray the supernatural community as unified to humanity, even though the tensions and fighting among species is occurring out of sight.
8/19/21, 12:25 AM
That was hot. I was wandering if Mikey was going to fuck Cody before he started slathering Cody with the cream. Maybe Cody has a twin brother. I'm picturing the twins ass full of Cody's dick when his nipples get coated and the cream was used as lube for his ass. He gets jacked off by Cody as they continue to fuck. Seems like the perfect time for the doctor to walk in. Thanks for sharing this series.
8/18/21, 10:55 PM
Enjoyed this HOT chapter and the twist at its end. Would love to read more about this new world in which Zeke finds himself.

8/18/21, 11:33 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you! We have another couple of chapters cued up, world-building (plus sexy time) included :)
8/18/21, 9:56 PM
Amazing addition! I love where this JOCKSLUT CORP universe is going!
8/18/21, 7:10 PM
A huge follower of the main story on GSS. And now I'm even more confused on how much is/was changed by Billy Bonkers. It's great to see more from other people's perspective, but how the hell did Jack have memories of Daniel as an ex before Daniel was even there, but then the manor??? Really romantic, but oh boy was putting it in Dalton Creek made me think way too much about the lore and what is happening in the main story to fully enjoy.

8/18/21, 8:01 PM
@BobbyBlobfish I love the lore! Thanks for the support. This is basically happening during part 3 of the "Dream" bit, not chapter 4 (?) Right before Daniel wakes up. Daniel's memories of their meeting are also changed. It is a huge mess honestly. You need a pen and paper to follow along at this point . I might have to make a forum post 😂😂
8/18/21, 7:48 AM
Happy you're back. You haven't lost your touch. This isn't in the Moocows story though, I think you posted it as a stand-alone story instead of a chapter?

8/18/21, 4:31 PM
@Norismo That is odd. For some reason, the chapter format didn't take. Thanks for letting me know!
8/18/21, 4:13 PM
Lost count of the times I've cum to this - excrutiatingly hot! Though that teasing at mpreg right at the end has set my mind racing - there MUST be a sequel to explore it and of course the new rescue team. I think I've found a new fave series
8/17/21, 9:40 PM
I really like this story, but two big problems here: punctuation and uppercases are all over the place ( "ask me this **.?**", "didn't know **What** I was), some words are missing ( do you see *me* as a person or as an object), sometimes letters (an*D* only do things with me. I was the one who was supposed to *b*ring you her*e*)... So I had to stop to make sure I properly understood. I mean, English is not my first language either, but here it's getting in the way of reading. The second things is that it comes WAY too fast. Even with those explanations, nobody would forgive that easily. Even if Kai puts conditions, it still feel like he got over a lot of issues and sympathize too much with Jae. It's not credible, so I'm taken out of the story, because Jae's kind of behavior is very toxic. Even if that's the point, it doesn't come like the story criticize enough, and if it's involuntary, it means one of the character is bordering on bad guy without meaning to.

8/18/21, 4:01 PM
@BobbyBlobfish Thanks for the comment. Punctuation is something I will work on, I am not so good on it, so I will work on it. As for the second the second part, I'll try to explain and touch on that. Kai will actually still feel uneasy around Jae, and won't want to actually spend time with him, but traumatic event will bring them together, so that's all I'll say on that. I'll also touch on why Jae seems toxic, and it should give a reason as to why he may seem controlling at time in future chapter. Hope that gives you a sense of where this is going, at least a bit. I read a series on Nifty that kind of inspired me to kind of right my own, and in it the guys were somewhat what you described, and very controlling, but they still loved there partner. I kind of plan to make a series out of this, if this story goes well, so keep the comments coming.
8/18/21, 3:35 PM
Great story! I appreciated how you establish very distinct narrative voices for Lysander and the pre-conversion Toby. And this line was hilarious: "[We] only hypnotise humans under circumstances where there is no other option, for example where we need them to do something for us or if they are resisting our will."