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8/20/25, 12:16 AM
I just love it. More, please!
8/19/25, 11:30 PM
Revisa la ortografía y la redacción. Faltan muchas tildes, hay palabras mal escritas y problemas de concordancia de género. Así, se vuelve confusa la historia. Aunque no es así, parece una mala traducción al español de un texto escrito en otra lengua.
Aug 18, 2025
Anonymous
8/19/25, 12:22 PM
Love the dialogue between the hero and the villain 👀 almost feels like Sam and James knew each other before they became what they are now 🤔 Would you be updating your other story about Superman and Lex Luthor anytime soon? 👀😅

sjg233
8/19/25, 7:07 PM
@Anonymous I’ve another 5 chapters of this story. I have two unpublished chapters for the superman story - I’ve never felt fully happy with them hence unpublished

Anonymous
8/19/25, 8:45 PM
@sjg233 Ooooo yay!! Can’t wait to read those chapters 😅 Oh I’m sorry to hear that about the Superman story. I feel like it’s a very niche category to get into but the way you wrote it was a good balance from not having Superman instantly be defeated by Luther but still being open to his idea of domination. 😗😅
8/19/25, 8:17 PM
Very good story! Hopefully another part will be added?
8/19/25, 8:09 PM
This is an extremely promising start!
8/19/25, 4:55 AM
For a minute I thought Tank was gonna go from fearless leader of the pack to everybody's insatiable big ass bottom bitch. Would have been hot to see his red neck buds take turns spit roasting and breeding him splayed out on the bar all night.

8/19/25, 12:03 PM
@[fegatan13](/user/show/10061933) Thank you for your comment. I thought about that. It’s a contender for the next time I write something similar.

8/19/25, 12:44 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Looking forward to reading more of your work!

8/19/25, 3:09 PM
@[fegatan13](/user/show/10061933) More to come soon. I’m planning to enter the Holloween contest.
8/19/25, 11:23 AM
Great stories I definitely wanna see it brought to conclusion!
8/19/25, 5:16 AM
Very interesting. I wonder how it will conclude in the last part.

8/19/25, 5:18 AM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) Only a week or so to find out hehe 😊

8/19/25, 6:42 AM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) Such a tease! But I know the wait will be worth it

8/19/25, 6:48 AM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) Ha ha I hope it will be worth it .☺️
8/19/25, 5:32 AM
The part where we finally get to see who the Parker brothers’ mom truly was got me a bit teary-eyed… to paraphrase Professor Henry Higgins, “she was a consort battleship!” Truly felt like Eliza Doolittle coming into her power (at least for the audience), after all she has probably always been an equally strong woman to match her husband. Fantastic writing!!! 👍👍👍
8/19/25, 4:56 AM
Did I just hear a MASSIVE metaphorical shoe drop? As Alexander has become more of a prominent figure in the Parker brothers’ stories as opposed to just a parental side character, I have been fascinated by his ability to be “ahead of the game” for most of their story, but he is truly shocked by this revelation. Can’t wait to see how you resolve this!