Recent Comments

Ben
7/29/21, 9:20 AM
Loved this! The details really painted the picture in my mind! <3
7/29/21, 8:51 AM
Yes, a new Topaz story! With a lot of his classic tropes! (Great to see the personality.exe file from "Various Techniques" again). Looking forward to seeing how this progresses. My one suggestion is that I hope in subsequent chapters we get more detailed characterization of the various men who get assimilated into the Dan hive.
7/29/21, 6:58 AM
Hottttttt
7/29/21, 6:41 AM
🔥🔥🔥
7/29/21, 2:09 AM
Will we see part 3 soon?

7/29/21, 3:46 AM
Hopefully, I was on Vacay last week, and before that I was having an issue where any new additions to the chapter were not saving so all my work was erased. I do plan to have a new chapter out soon. @darkblade2814

7/29/21, 5:16 AM
@ArdanWolfe I see, I hope you enjoyed your vacation and I hope your computer is working now
rwriter51
7/29/21, 4:38 AM
These boys a awesome together. At a couple of points I thought tio Hector was going to start rimming Julio or maybe fuck him while Julio was doing Pedro. We can always fantasize, right? Your story is really well-written, and certainly gets the juices flowing.
7/29/21, 3:35 AM
Sooooo hot. I love it.
Jul 28, 2021
Anonymous
7/28/21, 11:12 PM
Kind of wanted a bit more but it was still a good story.
7/28/21, 10:31 PM
This is amazingly hot! I love the mental changes that are slowly affecting the crew; seeing the Captain go from concerned to suddenly relaxed proves that whatever is in that pollen affects the mind. Maybe the pink pollen affects the upper body and pecs, and the blue pollen the lower body and ass? Hmmm...
7/28/21, 10:00 PM
HOT! I can't wait to see the rest of the games and punishments! I don't know if you take requests (or are even into this), but a game /punishment centered around cock and ball tickling would be AMAZING