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Jul 29, 2021
7/29/21, 9:42 AM
I always enjoy a good workie transformation. Shame it was so short but maybe you could recruit a friend!
7/29/21, 9:29 AM
hi hypnothrill thanks for comments... expect a few nods to other peoples stories 'in passing' chapters 2 and 3 mostly done.
Ben
7/29/21, 9:20 AM
Loved this! The details really painted the picture in my mind! <3
7/29/21, 8:51 AM
Yes, a new Topaz story! With a lot of his classic tropes! (Great to see the personality.exe file from "Various Techniques" again). Looking forward to seeing how this progresses. My one suggestion is that I hope in subsequent chapters we get more detailed characterization of the various men who get assimilated into the Dan hive.
7/29/21, 6:58 AM
Hottttttt
7/29/21, 6:41 AM
🔥🔥🔥
7/29/21, 2:09 AM
Will we see part 3 soon?

7/29/21, 3:46 AM
Hopefully, I was on Vacay last week, and before that I was having an issue where any new additions to the chapter were not saving so all my work was erased. I do plan to have a new chapter out soon. @darkblade2814

7/29/21, 5:16 AM
@ArdanWolfe I see, I hope you enjoyed your vacation and I hope your computer is working now
rwriter51
7/29/21, 4:38 AM
These boys a awesome together. At a couple of points I thought tio Hector was going to start rimming Julio or maybe fuck him while Julio was doing Pedro. We can always fantasize, right? Your story is really well-written, and certainly gets the juices flowing.
7/29/21, 3:35 AM
Sooooo hot. I love it.
Jul 28, 2021
Anonymous
7/28/21, 11:12 PM
Kind of wanted a bit more but it was still a good story.