i love this story, i was kind of worried that you wouldn't continue it

I'll echo the sentiment that farts have never turned me on before, but I enjoyed your writing of them

Love it!

I've never been turned on by flatulence before this; It takes a great story idea to get me going. It's a great prelude. I hope that the next installments will follow through with the transformation elements.

did you delete Luke's Little Brother? that was a super hot chapter and I was always looking forward to when his little bro would fuck that fat ass and make it his property.

Once I got past the capitalization and apostrophe errors, I really loved this story. I thought you had a very vivid way of describing farts and assholes, and I loved the twist with the security guards. I'd love to see you expand on this (but just maybe do a bit more copy editing next time!)

this was one great story Sir. Enjoyed it from beginning to end! Excellent work!

I've just read all your stories to date, and while I adore almost everything about them I do wish the penis shrinking/SPH were less prominent.

Man. What a slam dunk. Hot sex, a fun twist on reprogramming, a believable pre-sex dynamic to make it all really feel like Dave's changing him. Thanks for posting.

I want to retract what I said previously. I went back and re-read the previous two chapters and realize I have made a mistake. Coming off the previous chapters I and some of the other readers had a false impression that Max was actually pretty nice. I think that came from scenes like when he took Lucas to the park for some fresh air. Upon re-reading the previous parts I realized that Max has been extremely predatory the entire time. I think that the hot sex kind of distracted me to some of what was going on. For instance after that walk in the park Max physically forced Lucas's head into his armpit to dope him up on his pheromones and make him compliant. (It may have seemed like going to the park was for Lucas's benefit but really it was more like he was walking a dog for exercise.) There are many parts of the story where Lucas literally thinks that he wants to break free but he's physically been overpowered by Max and soon after, the drugging affect of the pheromones kicks in and he becomes unresisting. Earlier, before Lucas even understands what it will do, Max is shoving his spit down Lucas's throat to trigger it to awaken and swallow his entire horse cock. Similarly he activates Lucas's ass without asking if it's okay to do that. Once Max has lit upon Lucas, he has already decided that he is going to be his. This story isn't really so much about domination, it's about Max completely stripping Lucas of free will and humanity. The characterization is actually very, very consistent, it's just that once he has progressed to a certain point, Max no longer feels like he has to hide from Lucas exactly how much he is owned and drops the facade. The thing about this is that the reader is so in touch with Lucas's mind that even though Lucas is literally being physically altered and enslaved to Max in earlier chapters, it feels so good the true ramifications don't really hit home. Then when Max shows that actually Lucas is in far too deep, it's a shock to Lucas but it's *also* a shock to the reader. I think that's why a bunch of us kind of balked. We were enjoying the fantasy up to that point but then we realized we were far over the line that we thought we were. I really don't say this lightly but I think this is the hottest story on the site and I'm actually really excited to see what ends up happening, whether Lucas becomes a horny near mindless baby maker, or if there is some twist we haven't seen. That my expectations have been properly realigned I think I can enjoy the very dark ride more smoothly.