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Jun 29, 2021
Anonymous
7/19/21, 3:11 PM
I wish you could write more story, especially the story named ' my stepfather new master's.
7/19/21, 1:04 PM
Great premise and descriptions of their transformations. Love that we got two in one story!
JimmyS
7/19/21, 12:39 PM
Hot! hopefully the next part isn't far away!
Gasuda
7/19/21, 10:39 AM
This was a fun read, and you even got me tearing up just a little at the end. Really hot, and really sweet. Good work, Wesley.
7/19/21, 10:20 AM
i hope he finds his buddy
7/19/21, 9:41 AM
you should continue this story. it's rather hottt
7/19/21, 7:22 AM
big sub and you'll get a fan for life
7/19/21, 7:20 AM
if this website should be real, can you please give me the name?
7/18/21, 8:36 PM
I have an idea, make the coach a big submissive bottom and in a relationship with one of the teacher of the arts department (like the theater one)

7/19/21, 1:32 AM
I don't currently have plans for any coach characters, but I'll keep it in mind! @darkblade2814

7/19/21, 5:36 AM
@bluesuedewho I see, I hope the idea helps
7/19/21, 3:18 AM
Really interesting concept here, but to echo the above comments, the ideas don't go far enough. Also, I picked up on a lot of tension between the ideas at work (hope vs all of humanity's awfulness) and the fact that it was trying to be sexy. Over my years of reading NSFW stories, there have been a handful that I thought were amazingly good, and actually worsened by the inclusion of sex - that they only included sex because they were published on a website like Nifty or GSS to begin with. Like, the take out the x-rated scenes and they would both work better and be legitimate contenders for mainstream publication. You touch on some pretty big philosophical concepts here that, to my eye, are undermined by trying to make them something guys might jerk off to. I'd encourage you, if it's something you're interested in, to expand on it and not worry about making it sexy!